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Reviewed By: Shadow of Light [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh bad men!! How dare they become the souls of the babies!! *fumes* but before I get too out of hand I would like to give me own gift. Boy and girl twins huh? Well hey ya go, enjoy.
Beloved's gift: large amount of clothing to play wear to formal to sleepwear to beach wear suited for both boys and girls. Includes hats and shoes and other such clothing.
Nijiiro's gift: toys, books, and other accessories (hair brushes, dishes, and a 'How to Give Your Baby Everything and Not Spoil Them Rotten')
Both gifts will come in a large trunk carved with baby animals and such with a card tied on top with pink and blue ribbons. Card will read: 'We wish you nothing but happiness and good will. May the children grow up to be healthy and strong.' |
Reviewed By: A.M.T [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 19:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!BABIES!What to give them tough?
Bakura:Flame throwers?
NO!THEY'RE JUST BABIES!Maybe when they're two.
Bakura:*sigh*Ok.
Marik:Daggers?
When they're five.
Kalika:Swords?
When they're seven.I KNOW!I'LL GIVE THEM PLUSHIES!TWO CHANGE OF HEART PLUSHIES FOR THEM:ONE FOR EACH OF THEM!
Kakarot:And some money!
They're REALLY gonna need that.*jumps around*ONE MORE DAY!ONE MORE DAY!
Bakura:Ok Tory,its been FOUR DAYS NOW!What the hell is gonna happen tomorrow?!
^________________________^TOMORROW'S MY BIRTHDAY!
Everyone:What?!
YUP!^___________^I TURN THIRTEEN TOMORROW!
Everyone:Oh.HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
*sniff*Thank you! |
Reviewed By: goldaries13 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 18:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
*hands bakurasgirl baby shower gifts* Here`s gift no.1: one of those annoying little wind-up monkeys. You know the ones that you wind up and they beat the drum?
Gift 2: a baby furby. Evil baby furby. So the gift and the kid can be evil together. Enjoy! |
Reviewed By: hotaruchan27 On: April 14, 2003 18:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yeah we agree, ffnet is really starting to go down the crapper. From what I understand they don't even look at what they're taking down. They took down, Bakura's Wall a couple of days ago too for a different reason. Punks, the whole lot of them. Freedom of speech only applies if the majority agree, I suppose. ~_~
Tigerlily: Okay, let's talk about happy, fun stuff! For example, this fic! ^__^ Convenient, ne? Marik's gonna get a job, huh? I just hear it now...
Marik: -_- You want fries with that?
He could spit in the burgers and cokes of the people who piss him off... like Anzu!! She'd make his life hell in 10 seconds flat.
*giggles madly* Yes that would be funny. ^__^ Her cokes would probably be nothing but spit... eeewww I love Malik's reaction. Think it'll stain the walls? I wonder how Isis will react?
Tigerlily: What about Yami & Yuugi? Can you imagine the look on their face when they get told, not only is Ryou pregnant but he's not sure who's the daddy? I see a yami staring/glaring contest in the near future. ^_^
Okay, I'm going to be practical in my gift giving here. I give a diaper disposal thingy. You know where you toss the diaper in, twist the thing and you don't have to smell it? I got that for my friend when she found out she was having twins. Believe me, they're greatly appreciated by anyone with a nose, especially me. I can't stand the smell. -_- |
Reviewed By: Ryou's Mistress265 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 16:50 CDT
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*sigh* So malik didn't kick his ass. Well lets see, i wanna give Ryou two blankets, one pink and one blue and both have change of heart thingies on them. |
Reviewed By: Angel Black On: April 14, 2003 16:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
Angel: Nah i wouldn't a killed you. Like i said before then i'd NEVER figure otu. Mabye torture, threaten or come close to killing but i wouldn't kill you. Bakura's baby should be a girl. A girl Marik would be kinda scary! 0_0
Shadow: Actually, except for the hair color she'd probably act just like you! ^_^
Angel: -_- *pulls out box of matches* I'd give the girl a box of matches, but i figure the parents will still have a lot to deal with so instead........*gives Ryou aspirin and Pamprin*
Pamprin is this stuff my mom got me for my period and it works wonders. It takes care of back pains headaches cramps and any and all other symptoms.
Ryou: Uhh......thanks........i think.....
Bakura: ^_^
Angel: -_- What are you so happy about?
Bakura: If Ryou doesn't have a headache or cramps then morre than likely she won't be a bit-
Ryou: If you utter those words........
Bakura: *shuts up*
Angel: ^_^ *lights match*
Marik: FIRE! *lights match*
Bakura: Ooooo......*lights match*
Ryou and Shadow: *stuck in wooden house with three pyros* 0_0 |
Reviewed By: Pharaoh Yamis Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 16:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
I wanna get a gift for each of the kids. Since oen might be a boy and the other a girl, i wanna give a pink bunny plushie to the girl and a blue bear plushie to the boy. I think they would love em. Great chappie! Can't wait for when the little ones come into the world. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Tiamat On: April 14, 2003 15:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh I Love the story and I knew Malik would make a great daddy, he doesnt care who help create the babies :) My gift for Ryou might be considered evil hehe for one of the babies I give them a mini toy rod that looks like the millinum rod :) hehe setting up the problem of when they are older and Marik makes a rod joke the owner of the toy rod can ask their daddies what they mean :) hehe!
Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 15:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
LD: Oh now what are you going to do to my... I mean Marik?
Karen: Yay, Malik was all supportivey
LD: *smacks Karen* That isn't a word
Karen: But it is a good description of how Malik reacted. It is one of my words.
LD: Back to Marik...please don't hurt him...to badly. Although, I am sure there could be a way to make him feel better after a long day at work... |
Reviewed By: Dragondreamer Yami Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 15:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
So, didn't anyone else pick up on the "beat it" comment? BWAHAHAHA!!!
I'm glad to see the yami's have stopped fighting. I can't wait to see Malik feel the babies kick for the first time! He's gonna make such a cute mom! |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: April 13, 2003 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRREEEE!!!! RIGHT NOW PWEASE?!!! Ryou-chan is pregnant! YAY! ^_^ That is soooo cool! The baby will be sooo kawaii! I hope you don't keep who the father is in suspense for TOO long. JUST UPDATE REALLY SOOON! This is really funny lately also! Arigato! Ja ne! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: A.M.T [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2003 19:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it when you make them fight.So cute.aI got a manga today!Its a Cardcaptors one!One of my favorite animes.^________^Yukito is kawaii,but I like Yue more.Shh,don't tell*giggle*
I'm in such a good mood!ONLY TWO MORE DAYS!TWO MORE DAYS! |
Reviewed By: hotaruchan27 On: April 13, 2003 16:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Chris & Tigerlily: *rolling on the floor howling with laughter*
Tigerlily: Bakura and Marik really crack me up. It's a shame the ratings only go up to 10, this deserves a 12. I haven't laughed this much in quite a while. ^_^
^_________^ Have we mentioned lately how much we love this? Of course we'd have to, to review everyday, ne? Oh Gods, I couldn't pick a favorite part if I tried. This was beyond perfect! I think Malik's reaction is probably going to be the same as Marik's. They are 2 halves of the same coin so to speak. Or maybe he could just start laughing hysterically. That's what me and my sister did when our Mom told us she was pregnant. It was the funniest thing in the world to us because she hadn't had one in 16 years. *snickers* She figured her baby making days were behind her and got sloppy.
Tigerlily: In other fic news, we thought you'd like to know if you haven't found out yet...
Mally-chan's fic, When It Hurts The Most got pulled off of ff.net!! Bastards! But she has it on Mediaminer now so it isn't a complete loss. ~_~ But we knew you were supporting the fic and found it because of you. ^_^ She said to help spread the word when I asked where it went. *sighs* Have I mentioned how stupid ff.net is? |
Reviewed By: NegaCat On: April 13, 2003 16:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! Poor Ryou. The guy just got turned into a girl, now he's pregnant. *shakes head* that's gotta be a LOT to take in. I hope Malik doesn't get mad. Though I wouldn't blame him. Marik chews him out, then gets Ryou pregnant. THAT seems real fair -_- Anyway, The chappies are really good! The stories keep getting better and better! I never want you to stop, they're so good! |
Reviewed By: KittyChan On: April 13, 2003 16:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
HAHAHAHAHA! ROTFLMHO!!!! Those yamis are so possessive, aren't they? You have me crying on the floor by the time I finished the chapter. ^_^ You just brightened my day!
I've noticed something. I compared your "Family of My Own" chapter with "Make me Yours" and you have a lot more words in "Make Me Yours" (not including reviewer responses). The "Family of My Own" was about 1593 words and the "Make Me Yours" is about 3260! bis jump there! I see that you love to please your reviewers and put (twice as much) effort into those lemon chapies.
Now I go to sleep seeing Anzu being a complete idiot laughing while she scrapes the pavement. I'm trying to keep a positive view on her, but man, it is SO hard NOT to make fun of her! On fanfiction when I go to "Find" and type in "Anzu", 90% says "Anzu bashing!" or something like that. She really isn't that bad... it's just... it seems that eerybody makes fun of her (and does a really good job of it too...). I'm starting to have dreams of her doing stuff stupid. "Geting digested by a dinosaur is like friendship!" or somehting like that. Oh well. It's funny none the less. ^_^
~Kitty-Chan |
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