| "Baby of Mine" Reviews/Comments [ 468 ] |
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Reviewed By: Angel of Roses (not logged in) On: November 28, 2004 01:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O_O Wow... I read this fic for two days until I finished it. It's 1:25 A.M right now and I am happy that I finished this! ^^ I have been reading your fics since Wednsday! Tomorrow will be sunday and I shall start reading the sequel to this! I just loved EVERYTHING about this fic! Aunt Yami *snickers* I was cracking up at that one! And that one chapter where the kids find 'Puppy's Toys' had me laughing hysteracly! XD I just loved imagining Marik and Kura as Daddys. ^.^ They make cute daddys! And I also enjoyed the constant Anzu bashing! Ra, that never gets old! Oh, and the scene were Malik 'died' and Marik was crying, made my eyes watery. Seriously. ^^ I shall start reading the sequel tomorrow kay? Keep writting! It really makes us readers happy! ^^ Ja-ne!
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 03:36 CDT
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OMG I finally finished reading this novel, took me 3 days! Man, can't get enough of the rod jokes. and another OMG... I've caught up with everything you've written... at least here on mediaminer! Gotta go hunting for those other two on another site now. I think I read at one point that they're also on ffnet? gonna go check there next. Nanny Bakura and The Rose and Ryou (I think that's what it's called) I can't wait now to read the next installment of Return to Hades! Ciao!
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Title: Fin!
Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2003 21:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh gosh Im finally done and now I can get back to Anything for you! WHich is also a song by Evanescence! Omg I like got teary eyes when i thought Malik was dead and you still cease to amazze me about the thrill that goes on throughout the story. I like killed my computer because the babies were dead! Your style of lemon writing is great, you can always manage to put in a situatuion like baths and just get the mood going and I dont see that often, just find a bed, do it to it and your done, lol. And anywho when Marik exploded I was so shaken! And I need to get to read this now, Ryous dad is back at it! When will the bastard see through his sick and twisted ways?!!! I loved your stories and even though I want to read the next one, I dont want this to end! So until I review next time its ta ta for now, your great, and dont let anyone tell you otherwise!!!!!!!!!!!!! -Valea
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Title: Tears
Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 00:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg! I was like on the verge of tears when I could totally paint a picture in my head of Marik, in those sillly fast food get ups and then your best friend like taunting you, not that I have ever been in that situtation lol. Yeah it was cool and the heat is still on with the on coming trial, *thumbs up*
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2003 02:21 CDT
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hey Bakuras' girl I finally got a little access to a comp! not for long but it is better than nothing! I loved the rest of this story and will start on anything for you tomorrow you have already gotten past chapter 22! Sheesh that's a lot of reading but for you? heck I'll MAKE time to not only read but review as well! this series (as always) is great and as you can tell you have a great following here keep those sequels coming!!!! luv ya! --Cody-san |
Reviewed By: Malik's girlfriend [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2003 06:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is cool this fic is so mint. |
Reviewed By: Nodjmet/Liz On: June 18, 2003 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FF.Net wasn't working, so i came here. ok, this is for chapter 23. um, the dreams were...different. i mean, Ryou's was so innocent and happy while Bakura's was so dark. guess that's 'cause Bakura's the yami and Ryou's the hikari. |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2003 23:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wahhhh! It's all over! But it was great!! ^_^ I can't wai for the sequel!!! Have fun at your trip!!! |
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2003 17:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoa what a ending. can't wait to part three. |
Reviewed By: Angel Black On: May 30, 2003 14:17 CDT
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Great idea for a sequel! Is Jessica really want to go along with taht? Ok she was Cinetti's lover, but Steven must be getting really OLD. Course if he doesn't want to die of old age i can help with that........... |
Reviewed By: Angel Black On: May 29, 2003 22:47 CDT
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I just want to compliment you on your lemons. You have a knack for making each one different. Terrible twos.........i feel sorry for Bakura and Marik. Dads tend to get the worst deal. My nephew is two and at this moment he's sleeping in his crib. Normally my dad has to watch him every night so my brother/sister in law can work. now that i have no school im free. Two year olds are so sweet.........when they're sleeping. One of the times my computer crashed was caused by the little devil. They get into everything. I wish the four parents good luck in the last chappie and the sequel! That and maybe some asprin! MWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2003 22:34 CDT
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Awww...That was cute! THE STORY IS ALMOST OVER!!! 0_0!! When is the sequel gonna be up? |
Reviewed By: Angel Black On: May 29, 2003 13:34 CDT
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Angel: Awwwwwwww........it's so cute. So abou how old are Aten and Aria now? Two? five? Eleven? Fifty? ok so maybe not quite that old.......
Ryou: I'm seventeen aren't i?
Angel: Haven't you ever heard of waiting for children?
Ryou: I'm a MALE!
Angel: And i thought your mother had taught you better.
Ryou: I'm a FUCKING BOY FOR CRYING OUT LOUD!
Angel: 0.o I think you need a lesson in manners young one! *grabs Ryou's ear*
Ryou: YOUR THE SAME AGE AS ME!
Angel: Oh yeah! ^_^
Shadow: -_-'
Angel: *lights match* Shadow do you really want your tail to lose it's fur again?
Shadow: !_!
Ryou: Update! |
Reviewed By: A.M.T [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2003 06:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!! SEQUEL!!! Umm........
Bakura:It the last day of school
My god....YOU'RE RIGHT!!!!!SCHOOL IS OVER TODAY!!!
HURRY WRITE MORE!!!!! |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2003 23:38 CDT
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AWWW!! That was a cute chapter!! And they got Aria and Aten back!! ^_^ |
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