Reviewed By: Ryenon On: April 28, 2005 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this story alot, you just need to get the plot figured out so you can continue to write, Be more descriptive when your describing the who's and whats. It would help put a sense of reality into this. Keep Up The Good Work
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