| "My Immortal" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: Kincses [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 10:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the way the story was made and it was very creaqtive, but wasn't there anyway you could have had a happy ending? It was so sad and depressing. But i suppose now that i think about it, at least they still have their memory of one another, right? I hope that they can at least feel some contentment about that.
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Reviewed By: Acire [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 19:55 CST
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Aww, dont listen to Tsubasa_lover. *im talking to her right now* she actually loves your story, though she would never admit it. But actually you should be proud of yourself because not many things can make her cry... but she read your ficcy and sure enough she cried! ^-^ I loved your story too! It was wonderful! A sad kind of wonderful. *gives you two thumbs up* Good work! ^_~
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Reviewed By: Tsubasa_lover On: January 30, 2005 19:46 CST
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I hate you... you tried to kill off Yugi... but then again you didn't and uhh... yea... You made Yami try to kill himself!!! that crossed the line!! EVIL EVILLLL!!!! *sniffles* ;_;
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Reviewed By: Morna Sidonie On: April 02, 2004 10:47 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it I cried at the end I don't know what to say - it was beautiful and one of my favourite fanfic's sorry about the dumb review I'm still teared up
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Reviewed By: qeenofgames (mm.org member) On: January 23, 2004 19:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story shout IAM CRYING RIGHT NOW! no really I am man this was a touching story and i liked it even though I dont like gay stories.
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Reviewed By: Faeri On: July 16, 2003 23:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! That was so sad, i loved it ^^ Very original idea. Good job, i think i almost cried, and it takes *a lot* to make me cry. It was written really well, it really got the feelings across. Beautiful. |
Reviewed By: Arwynn On: April 03, 2003 23:46 CST
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~Scene: Camera shows a closed door to a bedroom. Beyond the door, there is crying heard. All of a sudden, the door opens breifly and a black panther with silver-tipped wings and yellow eyes steps out. When she speaks, her voice is strained, as if fighting tears.~
Yuekine: My mistress is unable to review your story because she is sobbing uncontrolably. *sniff* The fic was unbelievably, inexplicably heart-wreanching. She would like to say that it was a beautiful, sweet sorrow. *eyes welling up* Now, if you will kindly excuse me, I must go mourn.
~She steps back into the room and now two voices are heard lamenting.~ |
Reviewed By: Alona [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 22:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*cries* ...;_;... oh my god... this is so sad... *vaguely thinks about her own songfic to the song* ....anyway.... angst is good... good angst... *sniff* |
Reviewed By: ilpalazzo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 20:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heartbreaking. Horrible. (as in "horror") Beautiful.
Good job. |
Reviewed By: Star Magician On: April 03, 2003 18:13 CST
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That was SO sad! ;_;
But it was very well done.
I usually like happier fics but sad ones are nice too.
Good job.^^ |
Reviewed By: Solitaire On: April 03, 2003 16:26 CST
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That was so sad! How could you do that to poor, poor Yugi and Yami??!?! *bawls her eyes out*
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*sniffs* You're right--I've never seen a story like that before. That was so sad. u_u You are an evil, evil girl. You'd better write something happy to make up for that. XP
...It was good though. Horribly depressing, but good. |
Reviewed By: ananda On: April 03, 2003 16:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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_i_ like it. i thought it was well written and well thought-out. and also creepy--you did a good job of getting across the claustrophobic feeling, both physically and emotionally. good job. and creative... |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 15:50 CST
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Oh, and you picked the perfect song for this fic... I had it playing while I read... Ok now do a happy fic.. |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 15:49 CST
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No, don't listen to your friends. That was good! Well, I don't really like sad ones that much, but if you're gonna make it sad, make it sad, and you did.
Ugh this is so frustrating! good job! |
Reviewed By: Protector of love between Yami and Yugi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2003 19:48 CDT
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that was good |
