| "Lost and Found in Hina City" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: zhadowolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2008 02:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good would like to see you update real soon. Also let's see what would happen if he stays at the inn for a while.
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 18:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's pretty good. I doubt you'll be updating anytime soon, but if you do, I'll definitely read it.
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Reviewed By: Sh4d0w On: November 16, 2003 15:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good for a start but may I recomend you to create like a situation, lika another Keitaro only that with Motoko for example or something.....you just need to follow the series....laugther and more laugther.....just keep it up... Sh4d0w
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Reviewed By: god On: June 22, 2003 17:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
its ayte |
Reviewed By: Grand_Crusader [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2003 17:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
....Drooooool....
Need more and longer chapters...
Note to self: Purchase 8-14 of the manga and find the DVDs so I know what's going on:) |
Reviewed By: Xiao Xing On: April 08, 2003 07:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
oooh... its nice. please update! |
Reviewed By: Shin no tenshi On: April 07, 2003 17:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sounds interesting. ^_^ I love Ryo-chan *huggles P-chan plushie* Please continue. I'm just starting to rent some Love Hina dvds so I'll soon know who's who. |
Reviewed By: Luke Evans [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 19:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice fic, I hope you update soon. Anything that has Ryoga as the main character is good in my book. |
