| "Ageless life and eternal love" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: gladdecease [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2004 12:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
Not bad so far. Please continue the story. Please? I think you need to explain more about how they got into the house, and why they were trying so badly to get out.
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Reviewed By: the shadow On: April 10, 2003 13:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a good fanfic keep writing |
Reviewed By: dave On: April 07, 2003 20:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey you have done well done in creating this story. The reason i want you to use the title i put up because you said that Ash is the same age as the day he vanished so in essence Ageless Life and Eternal Love basically is that he is in love with Misty though he is back as a youth. |
