| "Tohru: Who will win her heart?" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Kage Ohkami [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2004 19:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
ooh!! please continue!! i wanna know what happens!! i hope Kyo and Haru do pair up though, hee ^__^. ~LaTeR ^__^ Kage Ohkami
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Reviewed By: sumi101 On: June 26, 2003 00:44 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
POST!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Gami On: June 17, 2003 17:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me likes, but you've GOT to update... Therer's no way a one-chapter fic is gonna get 15 reviews. ^_^ Remember, it's not the amount of reviews that counts, it's what's in them. Would you be happy if you got fifteen flames?
Anyway, PLEASE CONTINUE! I am loving this! When does Haru come in?? |
Reviewed By: goddess_diana_hecate [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 22:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
really good first cvhapter. plz don't let anything bad happen to yuki *pleads with puppy dog eyes* |
Reviewed By: Geuna On: April 07, 2003 16:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed the way you wrote this, and it's an awesome opening for the rest of the story (which I'm really looking forward to). Oh, and what did you mean by "What will Haru do when he realizes that Kyo is already taken"? I mean, that actually is a couple I really like, though I can't the focus is Tohru. ^__^ Kyo/Tohru forever!
Geuna~ |
