| "Keiko in Love: the Side-Story that Should Never Have Happened" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2007 13:37 CST
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*shiver* .. i knew she was too evil to be human.. but naraku. oh thats a twist. *shiver* it would explain why sesshy acted like he didnt want to be near.. him er.. her.. oh wat the heck. 'IT' distrbing. but funny. naraku in diffrent colors. oh. that would be funny.
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Reviewed By: Shadowdestiney_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2006 01:23 CDT
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wow and i thought i had an overactive imagination that was great i almost fell out of my chair laughing i dont think there is another story like that in the whole internet way to go!!! :)
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Reviewed By: u.c. On: October 04, 2005 15:20 CDT
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That was unspeakable!...well, ok maybe I'll say something. HA HA HA HA HA HE HE, (wipes tear), Ok. well. um. good job and all that.
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Reviewed By: freefallingtowardthesky [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 19:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh...i think i might be ill. i'm laughing, but i'm ill.
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Reviewed By: chenkydragon On: September 01, 2004 20:20 CDT
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-blinks...blinks...shudders- oh god.
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Title: lofl
Reviewed By: billy~ bob~ On: July 26, 2004 21:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol~ that was funny.... not at all what i had in mind but had me off my friggin chair laughing... please update soon.... as in VERY soon... ... oooh! i'll take keiko! please please! :puppy eyes: pretty pretty please? with suger on top? and sprinkles and cherries and... and... dammit just ppppplllllleeeeaaaassseeeeeeee!!!!!! :more puppy eyes: come on! please! ^_^"
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Reviewed By: krysthao On: June 03, 2004 18:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL this fic is very suprising, but mainly funny
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Reviewed By: Hino Mitsukiko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2004 14:42 CDT
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Dear GOD that was disturbing!
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Reviewed By: Jadedwaters On: April 10, 2004 01:24 CDT
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Amusing...yet...I've been scarred for life. Something about that was just so wrong and yet so seemingly right...::shudders::
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2004 14:36 CST
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Wow. That was just weird. Cool, but really really weird. ^-^
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Reviewed By: Arbor [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2004 16:07 CST
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...I cam dangerously close to spitting my teeth out while reading this. *midly traumatized.* alright, a bit more than midly. XDD
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Reviewed By: Amethyst [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2003 12:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
blinks Well . . . I'm traumatized. Forever . . . Man . . . I knew that Keiko girl was too evil to be a human! I knew it! NO sane humane being would subject such horrendous technicolor torture upon Sesshou without reason! That poor (nah, he has a house. He can't be poor), defenceless (well maybe not, he does have that whip thing), innocent (Sesshou - innocent?!), and helpless (wait. . he can transfrom into a giant doggy!) human (well he's technically a demon I suppose). Such evils can only be the product of Naraku's nefariously twisted mind . . . I applaud your close scrutiny of this evil hidden in a whirl of a multicolored rainbow. . .
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Title: review
Reviewed By: Hell's lil Bitch On: October 21, 2003 17:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL Narakus G.A.Y!!! LOL narakus gay narakus gay. i find that so funny!
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Reviewed By: Dark Princess On: July 14, 2003 10:16 CDT
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LMPFAO that was too damn funny :D i hope its ok to send that to a friend of mine :D thats was just too damn funny. great job and plz update 'This Mess We're In' soon.
The Flaying Hamster of Doom rains coconuts on your pitiful city,
~*~Dark Princess~*~ |
Reviewed By: mandi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2003 16:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If I didn't agree with her uhhh I mean him?? or ok, the really really scary THING, I'd probably well die. But then I'm practically in love with Sesshy anyway, however, I must go wash my eyes with acid in hope of ridding my thoughts of that vile image of all things a pink baboon suit. Then again, I think he wouldn't look so bad as a winter hehehe...
p.s. can I have the 5 bucks???and at the risk of inflating your head to unimaginable proportions, I think your an extremely talented writer!! |
Reviewed By: Aya_Nekono [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 11:39 CDT
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...::silence:: I suppose i should be terrified but i'm too numb to do much of anything...::cringes:: Naraku...bright colors...Sesshoumaru-sama...yes, that's rather scary. Funny though!
Laterz!
~*Aya*~ |
Reviewed By: Tatoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2003 16:07 CDT
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Lol. So marvelous, I really really like Naraku this way. Poor Sesshoumaru, he'll never escape.
So glad that guy from the next town found this story on his doorstep and passed the joy along. |
Reviewed By: Bishiglomper [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2003 23:01 CDT
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O.O |
Reviewed By: Lizzycat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2003 23:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh dear God that was very disturbing. FUNNY, yes, but when I started getting mental images in my head I shuddered (and almost spit out my broccoli and cheese I was eating). *quickly wipes off remnants of broccoli and cheese from computer screen*
fake wig: $19.99
platform sandals: $29.99
Naraku in drag singing a song that should be the drag queen anthem: Priceless! |
Reviewed By: Me.. On: April 10, 2003 13:35 CDT
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HAHA!!!! Can't help but review both at ffnet and at mmorg......this is just soooooo funny!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Larania On: April 10, 2003 11:46 CDT
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*blinks*
*stares*
Dear god... IT MAKES SENSE! |
Reviewed By: grumpycarrie On: April 10, 2003 09:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh sweet huley, MY EYES THEY BURN!!!! The scary thing is I can see that happening. If I sleep, I know I'll have nightmares. hot pink baboon suit... I don't know wether I should laugh or cry. I think I'll do both. Maybe you could do a one-shot of the thugs at the police department when the cops are getting(sp?) their statements or whatever. Keep up the awesome writing.
"The only normal people are the ones you don't know very well." - Joe Ancis |
Reviewed By: Katzztar On: April 10, 2003 04:18 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD Now this was amusing!!! |
