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Reviewed By: galene On: March 07, 2004 01:21 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
totally completely awesome! I love it love it love it ^_^ *saves link*
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Title: YEAH!!!!!!!! ^_^
Reviewed By: InuGirlTeen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2004 18:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH!!! You FINALLY finished this story!!! I read this fic a loooooooooong time ago back in june but it was incomplete. I about went itno withdraw because I couldn't finish it but by october i fine and dandy. Well, I have been reading your fic 'Dead Famose' and I love it. I decided to check up on your other fics to see if any of them were as good and guess what found! The fic I almost died because i couldn't finish it completed. I looooove this story and it was GREAT! I hope you continue to right stories for me to read! ^_^ Bye! I am going to go check it Dead Famose has been updated.
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Reviewed By: Drof Tceferp [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2004 18:40 CST
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8.8 *sniff.* This is so sad...Reminds me of Karasu...Erm, read my fics to see what I mean...Um, anyway, this is a super fic, and I can't give it a rating it's so good, this seems to be the case with your fics. Anyways, great fic. I love it.
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2004 16:17 CST
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Yay! It's done! Great story!
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Title: ch 13
Reviewed By: Alesyira [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2004 00:31 CST
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That was wonderful! It did seem like the ending was just WHAM! right there - but, it worked out beautifully! It wrapped up rather well, and I'm so happy to see everything end up (for the most part) right again! Nothing would be perfect after such a set of events - ...but it finished just fine. Great story! I must read more of your stuff - I enjoyed this one a lot, and made for a great afternoon of reading. :)
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Title: ch 12
Reviewed By: Alesyira [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2004 00:12 CST
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That was a heart-warming chapter. Left me feeling better than all the other chapters I've read so far - but this chapter wouldn't seem quite so special if I hadn't been subjected to the agonizing frustration and annoyance and anger at the previous chapters. The mixture of action, suspense, drama, angst, small, slightly mushy moments, and amusing scenes really makes for a catching tale. Great story!! Must read on...
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Title: ch 11
Reviewed By: Alesyira [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 23:52 CST
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I had all this wonderful amazing stuff to say about Kagom'e father discovering that 'Yoko' was really Inuyasha... but then I forgot every damned word when that scene hit - like a ton of bricks. I was shocked and at a loss of words or coherent thoughts for a good five minutes - then I had to re-read that section to make sure I hadn't imagined it. That was an amazingly horrible slap in the face - written so that you just TASTE the shock and outrage and forget everything that came before it. Craziness. Must read on, the suspense is grating!
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Title: ch 10
Reviewed By: Alesyira [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 23:28 CST
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*shocked* That man really HAS brainwashed her mother!! This chapter was highly upsetting - and you did such an EXCELLENT job of writing it! You got teh point over so well, I was just as angry as Kagome was - well... I can't say I was THAT mad - I didn't go through her experience... but you conveyed the emotions and distress to the point I almost couldn't stand it myself. Great! You have an occasional spelling error - but... It could be that I'm just a damned American and I'm mixing up the slight differences between our cultures. *falls over* Who cares? Off to the next chapter! I'm excited to see things working out towards an end - in their own frustrating ways. ^_^
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Title: ch 9
Reviewed By: Alesyira [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 23:00 CST
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*silence* I'm satisfied that Kagome finally told Inuyasha what was wrong - but now I worry what will come of it all.... This is a frustrating story - true - but it... it's heartening to see that even though she feels she's alone in her suffereing, there is at least ONE who will stick by her side and defend her through the end. *sigh*
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Title: ch 8
Reviewed By: Alesyira [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 22:35 CST
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That was adorable. I love the fact you're throwing in well written, happy scenes like this to kind of, off-set the frustration of the other stuff going on. Their roleplaying and 'spilling of guts' to each other was something very, very nice to see. Great job writing this chapter. I must read on. :)
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Title: ch 7
Reviewed By: Alesyira [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 22:13 CST
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*shocked* THAT was completely unexpected. I'm seriously under the impression that Denji is some evil youkai that can cast excellent spells to conceal his evilness and make people fall in love with him - and then, while everyone thinks he's perfect, he can slowly work on driving Kagome insane or evil or utterly angry beyond reason - causing her to be unable to purify the jewel anymore. Like something Naraku would want to do in one of his especially evil moments. *shudder*
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Title: ch 6
Reviewed By: Alesyira [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 21:58 CST
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Like a deer caught in the headlights - poor Kagome! *falls over laughing* That chapter was priceless. I had to leave on an errand mid chapter - so I mulled over what Kagome would possibly say to her father right in front of Inuyasha... But I didn't quite expect this. :) Truthfully - I wuold have to say that psychiatrists and their patients have to have more confidentiality than that - but suspension of disbelief really works to the advantage here and makes for a damned funny twist. Great chapter! Must read on... I'm sorry if I review too much - I just enjoy leaving so many points and comments... I know I'll forget them after I read a bit farther....
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Title: ch 5
Reviewed By: Alesyira [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 21:12 CST
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!!! Oh, this is so frustrating!.... Wait... Didn't you warn us this would be a frustrating story? *smacks forehead* You were VERY right. Must read on... I'm really wanting to wring Denji's neck. And I can't wait to [picture] the looks on their faces when they find out she's NOT making up her 'imaginary' world of demon slaying... Great work! And you using 'maths' didn't bother me in the least bit - I accept some things are just different between our countries. :) I just don't know what's considered right or wrong in comparison to American crap - so I don't bother poking at it with a stick.
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Title: ch 4
Reviewed By: Alesyira [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 20:08 CST
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!!!! Poor Kagome! I'm finding myself frowning more and more as these chapters go on, and feeling kind of hung on whether she's imagining his hostility or not. I'm really curious as to what's going to happen next - Certainly Souta and Grandpa saw that couple of comments from Denji were unnecessary and hurtful?? :( Poor poor Kagome. She needs her own little Inuyasha plushie to cuddle with when he's gone - maybe it would make her feel better. Better yet, Inuyasha himself needs to give a little comfort.
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Title: Ch 3
Reviewed By: Alesyira [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2004 19:50 CST
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!!! I can't stand the guy! But I really think Kagome's going about this the wrong way... Well... I guess we all would do things the wrong way if we were as young as she... I can see some yucky problems coming up between Kagome and that Denji guy. Sheesh - and her MOM thinks it would be a better idea for Kagome to tell him about her Sengoku Jidai thing?? I don't THINK so - her mom should have been smarter about that and broke the news herself with some subtlety. Silly mom.
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