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Title: honeymoon
Reviewed By: themonsterinyourcloset [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2007 07:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this story andi hope you continue with it and i wanted to know if you could send me the honeymoon (ryou & bakura) of this fic thanks :]
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Reviewed By: foxkit [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 02:10 CDT
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ooh! make a fic about their honeymoon!!! and continue!!! PLEASE.....>
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Reviewed By: paniwi (as usual NLI) On: March 16, 2005 13:05 CST
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I cannot begin to understand how much I love this, and I defenitely want a story about them robbing Yami's tomb (forgive me if you already did, haven''t checked the rest of your stories yet) I love the way Bakura became a "good-guy" usually you'd have a one-shot with Ryou breaking down and Bakura 'miraculously' coming to terms with his feelings for Ryou, but this was truly excellent. woot woot, keep it up
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Title: aka KuraMagicianGirl (not logged in) or Dark Magician Girl / Hikaru on ff.net
Reviewed By: Shadow Mistress (not logged in) On: December 02, 2004 23:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is awesome! I loved it a lot! The third ch. definitely changed from the first two ch. But they're all good. The first one was like S&M, and the second one was similar until Bakura told Ryou that he loved him, then it got less dark, but still an excellent ch. And the last one, ends with a good and happy ending. ^_^ I loved all three ch, all in different ways. I thought you were going to write another lemon? But it's been a very long time since you said you were going to. What happen to it? That's what I want to know. ^_^ hehe. I think I'd enjoy to see your original ending with angst as well as this happy one. Hope you write more soon, see ya around. ^_~
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Reviewed By: Mooselini McSqueegee (not logged in) On: October 24, 2004 21:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know.... I think I may have read this before. I didn't remember the first or third chapter at all, but I remembered the second chapter word for word. ^_^; Anyhooble, I just wanna say that this is a great fic. As are many of the other ones that I've read by you. ^_^ Looking forward to more stories from you! ~Mooselini McSqueegee~
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Reviewed By: Mika Kitty 666 On: September 27, 2004 16:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn that was a good fic. I think you should defintly write a wedding and honeymoon fic.
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Reviewed By: Red Dragon Of Egypt On: September 18, 2004 18:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful job simply superb this is the best R/B fic ive read in a LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONG time i mean its great to finally see him as he is with a Yami you is as he should be hehe and best of all NO TEA TO RUIN IT hehe well great job again TTFN TA TA FOR NOW ^__^
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 21:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Okay I was on such a tangent before that I forgot to beg relentlessly for that pic again. I know you sent it to me before, but my old computer died, taking everything with it to the grave, including said yummy pic! so if you could PLEASE send it to me again I'd be ever so grateful! THANX! Emeraldfairy18@hotmail.com I love you HATO!
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 21:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok Hato I KNOW that there is another chapter to this series, I've READ it for goddess sake! So why didn't you post it with all of the others? I WANT THE WEDDING CHAPTER, AND I WANT IT NOW! so I'll beg relentlessly until you post it! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSE EEEEEEEEEEE POST IT!
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Reviewed By: Inu-Ice-Dragon (Stories on FanFiction.Net) On: February 06, 2004 21:30 CST
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I love it! Please put in another chapter soon and please write the wedding and honeymoon. I'm sure a lot of people would like it including me. Update soon PLEASE! Ja Ne
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Reviewed By: Tayko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2004 11:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i forgot to sau it's the best ryou bakura story i've ever read! Liss Tayko
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Title: Tayko
Reviewed By: Tayko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2004 10:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!!!!!!!!! Super!!!!!!! I love the storie it's beautifull! keep up the stories like this! (sorry iff i wrote somthing wrong I'm from holland!) Much love Tayko
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Reviewed By: MichiruT On: January 04, 2004 17:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv this fic, its gotta be my favorite Ryou/Bakura fic, you really captured their images in this story, anyone who has a problem with it doesnt know really good art =^_^=
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Reviewed By: Masochist Roni (my penname on FF.N) On: January 02, 2004 06:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just luv this fic! You are just so awesome! Anyone who thinks otherwise can rot in the underworld and be eaten by zombies! You rock!
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Reviewed By: Slv_&_Mstr_girl On: December 09, 2003 12:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the sadistic & masochistic pairing! I love how twisted Bakura was in the begining and then he was really sweet and romantic. I've got a picture in my head of Bakura and Ryou together on that hill together, with Ryou in his leather gear OMG 0-0 Sexy! As you've guessed, i love it!
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Title: Want More and Pic
Reviewed By: Sharon (yugiohgirl03 not in the mood to sign in) On: December 07, 2003 22:33 CST
Comment/Review:
You got an excellent fic here want the fic that tells about their marriage and honeymoon. 'Specially the part where they rob Yami's tomb. Halirous. Want fic. will e-mail for it want more. I am also laughing out loud and dieing of it at the thought of Yami chasing Bakura after he finds out that he robbed his tomb. Perfect Fic!!! A+++++!!!!!
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Reviewed By: al On: November 27, 2003 18:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i knew your pen name was familiar. I read your pg - 13 fic before. Isn't a sadistic and masochistic couple very dangerous? good thing they changed. This wasn't a humor fic but it was funny .. i'm just humor deprived.
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Title: PS to last review - I flaked--
Reviewed By: JennyNemesis On: November 08, 2003 10:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
God, I was so hot-and-bothered I forgot to include my email address so you can refer me to the source pic: I'm at JennyNemesis@netscape.net. Great big lemony cheers.
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Title: Woof.
Reviewed By: JennyNemesis On: November 08, 2003 10:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww yeah!! This kinda thing brings out the cavegirl in me. I'm slobbering. You can never have too much S&M with these babes, so keep bringing it. That was INCREDIBLY hot. Would LOVE to have a copy of that picture. More slavery, more joy! Therapy be damned!!
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Reviewed By: darkgreylight On: September 28, 2003 01:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful story. Please continue. Also, could you send me the pic that inspired this? -halfwayblue@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: B0nB0nCaTz On: September 27, 2003 04:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really sweet and i would like to read the thing about the honeymoon and stuff so keep up the good work.............
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Reviewed By: Carmen5 On: September 20, 2003 20:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi this is really good even though im not a great fan on lemons but overall it was really good , i didnt really the lemon parts but it was really really good all three of your chapters!
From Carmen5 |
Reviewed By: Mercedes_no_Inuarai On: September 14, 2003 22:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm a tough critic, so don't take that "6" as a bad thing. ^_^ Actually, I really can't even GIVE an accurate O/C rating since this is the first Bakura-centric fanfic I've read. *L* So, ignore that altogether.
The sadomasochism in the first part of this series was freaky, but I made it through it and read the other two parts. The sugary sweetness of the final chapter especially made up for it. *L*
Your characterization of some characters (namely Seto and Marik) is a bit shakey (hence the seven on the SoW rating), though I do believe you got Yugi and Yami dead-on. ^_^ I'm not sure if I like the SetXJoey pairing that I'm seeing all over, but I can deal with it in small doses, like in this fic.
Good description, decent grammar, though you might want to start using a beta-reader to proof your fics, if you don't already. They're a good thing to have.
There were three things in this chapter I realy liked: TRyou getting pissed and locking Yami and Bakura in the closet, the conversation the two HAD in the closet, and Ryou changing back to himself instead of a clone of Bakura. ^_^ That last part especially. I like Ryou the way he is, not as some punk. ^_^
All in all, a pretty good fic. *goes hunting for more RyouxBakura* |
Reviewed By: XxAllisonxX [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2003 20:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'd like to read of their marriage. I loved it, i was totally speechless.^-^
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Reviewed By: Shads On: August 02, 2003 22:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You writing is simply amazing! This is one of the best YGU fics I've ever read. And the wedding/honeymoon fic would make a great read, so if you get a chance, please write! ^^ |
Reviewed By: KaibaGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 19:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
O.O Wow. That was probably the best Bakura/Ryou fic I have ever read, and believe me, I have read a lot of them. I loved the sadistic elements in the first two chapters, and I love the sweetness of the second and third chapters too...a perfect balance!! Please, please, please write the wedding/honeymoon fic, I need to read it!! |
Reviewed By: Jonez On: July 18, 2003 03:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought this fic was really well done. It rocked! I would love to see a more in-depth story on Ryou and Bakura's honeymoon and wedding. Please keep writing such great fanfics! |
Reviewed By: LonelyFox On: July 17, 2003 13:55 CDT
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That was so sweet! Please do a chapter telling about their wedding and honeymoon...*dies laughing about them robbing Yami's tomb and having sex in his bed* |
Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 02:48 CDT
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I never pictured Ryou as a masochist, and I definitely never thought anyone could pull it off, but you did an exellent job of it! It'd be so cool to see the honeymoon scene chappie thing, too. And even cooler if this was continued with a lemon, pwease? *Chibi puppy eyes* Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Koori On: June 08, 2003 19:27 CDT
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...Wow, you are a fantastic writer, I mean your plot, your writing style, everything, the fic is the best bakura/ryou I've ever read, I'll read all of your fics once I have time.
Keep writing. |
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