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Reviewed By: Heta Noitio On: February 07, 2005 11:39 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Quess what? You just made Yohji/Schu may favorite pairing with Yohji/Aya. *smiles happily* They are so cute together... And they just somehow fit together, also. You have made this all very sane. Sorry for my bad grammar, that wasn't the word. What I mean is that this fic could really happen. It makes sense. And all those meetings Between Yotan and Schu, and when finally Yohji realized that he wants something more... *sigh* I couldn't let this go off my hands without reading to the end. And there is still more comin', right? *puppyeyes*
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Reviewed By: jgal [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2004 22:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's really good writing, though not professional but still managed to get me addicted on the story. i liked it. and i wanna know what happen next. is there a potential NagiXomi there?
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Reviewed By: wannabeinanime [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2004 19:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi! I guess I'm a little late on starting to read this fic, but i love it and that should make up for it! Hopefully you will keep the updates coming so I'm not left in suspense for too long. Keep up the great work, it's very entertaining! Ja
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Reviewed By: mon On: September 18, 2003 05:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
sequel? yeah! ^_____^ I need it!!! Wooohoooo.... *heart* *heart*
I love S/Y fics!!! |
Reviewed By: Thorne [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2003 12:18 CDT
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I love this story. And the end was just beautiful, much more than I would have thought was possible for Yohji and Schu. |
Reviewed By: Xellas M. [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2003 18:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great story! Very fun read. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Stefanie On: June 23, 2003 12:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
WOW! For a moment there at the end I thought Schu was dead, so happy I was wrong. ^_^ I've loved reading this story and hope to see more from you in the near future. ^_~ |
Reviewed By: gale On: June 23, 2003 09:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
a happy ending, excellent.
Ive loved reading this story but was a bit worried that the end might dissapoint but its great like your website by the way,cant wait for your next story |
Reviewed By: a On: June 16, 2003 17:08 CDT
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oh...so sad! write more! |
Reviewed By: MiniMorr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2003 16:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ahem.
Chapter 13, please? *grin* |
Reviewed By: Stefanie On: June 14, 2003 12:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
I've been loving this story up until chap. 12 Please don't turn this into one of those deeply depressing endings! *cries*
Please continue and update soon. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Pandora.81 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2003 08:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhh, this is so great! Really great!!!
But you're EVIL! Ahhh, why do I get the feeling that this won't end good for poor Schu and Yotan?
Go on and please update soon... pretty please. I need more S/Y goodness!!! ^_^
p.s. Had the same problem with ff.net. Today it worked though, probably they fixed it. ^^ |
Reviewed By: Vertigo On: June 14, 2003 04:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
A fun fic - until Ch 12. *worried* |
Reviewed By: Miss J On: June 14, 2003 00:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow..
this is not gonna turn out sad right???
plzz...make it a happy one!!T__T |
Reviewed By: MiniMorr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2003 20:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I've already bugged you about this one over at ff.net, but again, I just want to say that what you have here is good - really good!
Keep up the great work - there isn't enough SxY-fics out there! :) |
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