| "Yami's Past" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Raxzje On: July 08, 2004 11:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the story you reallt capture the characters and the way you write the small details is perfect! This might be me, but there are 4 chapters here and they all are exactly the same O_o. please correct me if i am wrong.
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Reviewed By: Ra's folower On: November 03, 2003 21:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i saw u r very good at pertraying egypt for thaat i was born there and i live there right now you are theonly one who is one to do so good at maling a visual disctripton of me my land i am quit sorry if my english is un readable but i have only started this strange language a ytear ago so me very sorry to you persons who reading this at moment :S
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Reviewed By: Ice_Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2003 09:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! That's all I can say. You are an amazing author! ^__________________________________^ |
Reviewed By: Kirikou [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2003 08:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was so cute how Yugi climbed up the tree to hide from Yami ^^
Please write more soon!!!!!!!!
(btw.... Frying pans!!!!Where?!Where?!?!?!) |
Reviewed By: CurseofChaos13 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 10:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
I LOVE FRYING PANS!!!!!!!!!!! |
