| "the super market" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: ZeroEdens evil twin On: July 24, 2003 22:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
god was that ever lame i swear
lol j/k love ya oh and zeroeden loves ya too bye kimmie firasegawa |
Reviewed By: ZeroEden On: July 24, 2003 22:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its fatastic i loved it was funny exciteing and sad but that might be the song im listening to who knows (shrug) bye! |
Reviewed By: Rane_shannon On: June 28, 2003 23:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
It is a very good fic so far you just need to finish it. I would of pictured your character(Kira) to be a lot more aggressive especially towards vegeta lol. OH yeah and go easy on the chickens okay. (this is to bitchy1): big sis i have one word for you "CALM". |
Reviewed By: bitchy1 On: June 22, 2003 12:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn Kimmi-chan you're alittle messed up aren't ya? it's ok though, that's what makes you "special". By the way YOU BETTER NOT HURT MY LITTLE SISTER IN THIS FIC OR I WILL COME BACK HOME AND KICK YOU IN THE SHIN!! (poor miguel) |
Reviewed By: bitchy1 On: June 22, 2003 12:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn Kimmi-chan you're alittle messed up aren't ya? it's ok though, that's what makes you "special". By the way YOU BETTER NOT HURT MY LITTLE SISTER IN THIS FIC OR I WILL COME BACK HOME AND KICK IN THE SHIN!! (poor miguel) |
Reviewed By: wren_legacy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2003 12:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Whats wrong with stupid stuff, huh? Teehee, you story is great and now i must tell my sister to go and read! Bwahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!! Pwease update soon? *puppy eyes* Also, in around three weeks my story should be up! Come and read? you would probably like! Its something abit like your! We are eeeevvvvviiiiiiilllllllll!!!!!!!!! Okay, i'm going to shutup now! Happy writing! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: rebuttal101 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2003 12:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahahahahahahahahahahahaha,ok, I must admit, the man in the chicken suit is hilarious kim. Now how I ended up in the story, I don't understand but ok. Now then, I must finish my fanfic with you in it...it's currently gathering dust. I lost my steam there for a while, and it hasn't come back yet. So sad...anyway, later |
Reviewed By: rebuttal101 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 23:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
transportation from the grocery store to the mall...mopeds for the 4 chicks, and nice speedy cars for the guys.... |
