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"Ball of Yarn" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
 Reviewed By: Critic  On: October 05, 2003 14:10 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
All of your lemons are great, fantastic...but i can't help but notice that you use the same expressions all the time in all of you fics. Like, "nailed the prostate head on", "cock melting," "bent into a u-shape," etc...
 Reviewed By: starcrest [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 25, 2003 21:00 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Gorrilla? That was unexpected.

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