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"It's in the Blood" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ]
 Reviewed By: Cristina  On: February 07, 2004 17:33 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great fanfic! I can't wait to read the part 2 to this story. Keep up the great work!
 Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: Tingeta  On: January 17, 2004 19:30 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm loved it! I don't want to waste anytime writing the review because I want to keep reading the next saga..so i'll write a better review in the "It's in the family" saga.. All I can say is that you are an awesome writer and I can't wait too read the next story. :)
 Title: Infinitis
Reviewed By: Infinitis [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 12, 2004 16:09 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I loved this fic! I think u did a really good job on the overall story ^^ Gosh! It's been a wile since i read a really exiting fic! I was grounded one day because I was totally into it I couldn't stop! I meant that as a good thing ^.~ -ja ne- Untill the next time i review and keep on going!
 Title: Your fic- Its in the blood
Reviewed By: Pandora_Marwell  On: December 27, 2003 00:57 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow! It was great- but now its gone :,( Kept me up from 10pm-7am. Couldn't leave it alone. I cried about Cleos diary extract. Loved every moment. In all Orphen fanfics, you'd be lucky to find 1 in 20 well done, and another 1 in 100 I might be inspired enough to write about. Nice one, and well done for bringing out other sides to all the characters. I'm in the UK, and SSO isn't an option for me, so its nice to see insight to the different relations (What made me laugh most were the uncanny instances of friendship between Hartia and Orphen that well reflect that of my own best friend and I; a very human approach which is often overlooked.)Bring on the Sequel!
 Reviewed By: kmf [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 23, 2003 10:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Excellent story ^_^ Well rounded, exciting, romantic and funny; what more can you possibly ask for!

kmf
 Reviewed By: blu-freak  On: June 30, 2003 02:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think your fic is really good. Loved the story. Totally had my attention the entire time. I enjoyed it a lot, and their aren't too many good Orphen fics out there. Can't wait for the next chapter...so...please update! Keep it up!
 Reviewed By: warm_gray  On: June 18, 2003 14:47 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
While the ideas in the fic are not really all that new (there are stereotypes that even the characters of orphen follow... such as the constantly bickering but madly in love couple =) which tend to lead to the same or very similar situations in other fics/series), the presentation is done well enough to really get a reader hooked...I know I am... completely.

There are some parts of the series though wherein I felt that there was a bit too much emotional turmoil and reading was starting to feel like watching a telenovela (soap opera). (Truth be told, I could no longer read the text clearly when I reached the later chapters because of my tear filled eyes.)

As a whole, I really enjoyed this fic and hope to see an update soon. Keep up the great work!
 Reviewed By: Bianka-chan  On: June 13, 2003 16:53 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
First things first, I must say that you really moved me with this one. The death of Erin Ongoing was, to say the least, heart-wrenching. I couldn't believe that he was killed! He seemed so nice...

As cruel as this may sound, I love character torture-especially if it's done onto the female lead. It only means that when the male lead finds out, he's pissed as hell.

Style of Writing: Your style of writing is precise and descriptive, leaving you with nothing but a clear picture of exactly what's going on. Nothing short of impressive.

Spelling & Grammar: As far as I can tell, there are no spelling mistakes. Grammar-wise, you have good English.

Originality/Creativity: Like I said before, there are so many plot twists that you completely leave me dumbfounded sometimes. There is no double, there is nothing like it, others cannot be compared to this story.

Enjoyment Factor: You've got so many emotions in here. It absorbed me immediately. Nothing else needs to be said.

Overall Rating: It deserves nothing less than a ten for keeping me occupied for fifteen minutes. Honestly, I didn't speak and I didn't move at all while I read this, and that's a really hard task.

That's all for this extremely long review. I might just start putting my own fanfictions on this place. This place is waaay cooler than fanfiction.net. Thanks for the update!

~Bianka-chan

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