Reviewed By: Tyler Durden2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 09:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I find it ironic that you wrote, "This is a sucky place to stop" at the end of your fic instead of writing "This is a sucky story to start writing" at the beginning. I don't care if you claim you were high when you wrote it, although it's impossible to get high from sugar because it has no caffeine in it. Anyway you need more description so readers can tell what's happening. You need to think about how the characters act and talk before you start writing. Most of all you need a plot. If it don't make these changes this particular tale will continue to be a pointless waste of time. This is just a lazy effort.
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