| "The Little Light" Reviews/Comments [ 44 ] |
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Reviewed By: ShadowFireHeart [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2009 08:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very short, but good. You gotta continue the sequel already!
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Reviewed By: ShamonaCeline [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 19:15 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Nice fic! this is best story i read...
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Reviewed By: punch it! On: March 13, 2004 14:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great.
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Reviewed By: Samantha J.C On: November 30, 2003 03:03 CST
Comment/Review:
In the first chapter you did not ask which group we wanted to be in so here gose: I am sort of a nutreal person but as I hate bullyies I'd have to be in Yugi's group but another thing about me is that I like to try and understand why someone is being a bully in the first plase so I would try to be Yami's freind too, but I would not be two faced about it. oh and by the way great fic!
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Title: I would like very much to be in your fic.
Reviewed By: Samantha J.C On: November 30, 2003 02:42 CST
Comment/Review:
Name: Samantha Carpenter Age: 14 Type of Magic: earth Personality: I am a person who dosent let people push her around,but will resort to violence only as a last resort. I hate seeing other people getting picked on, sort of a private person, kinda spiritual. Physical Appearance: long brown hair, glasses, eyes that allways seem to be changing to diferent shades of green, average height. a little pale. Any other information: likes to wear dark colores, looks horible in bright or very light colores,
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Title: i wanna be a student!
Reviewed By: AnimelilKitty On: November 01, 2003 17:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Name:Kitty Mew Age: 14 Type of Magic: water Personality:very hyper, helpful, laughs WAY too much^__^ , very happy go lucky girl^__^ Physical Appearance:chinese, long hair normally in a low ponytail, black eyes and hair, average height, contacts Any other information: love anime and manga^__^ and kitties too^________^
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Reviewed By: shadow_demon18b On: October 18, 2003 02:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love story i hope you make a sequell.
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Reviewed By: Yugioh reader On: July 09, 2003 22:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Age16
Pleese make a sequal this was great! I think that you should make the sequel still takeplace at school though. |
Reviewed By: Shade Azuna On: June 17, 2003 17:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Gasp* SEQUEL!!!!!!! YOU HAVE TO DO A SEQUEL!!! |
Reviewed By: Mary Ann On: May 19, 2003 19:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A sequel would be soooo cool and can i be in next one if you do a sequel to this story. That was a cool when Yugi kicked Kabias butt. But I would really like to see a sequel. |
Reviewed By: Mary Ann On: May 18, 2003 22:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL I hope you update soon and that maybe you will contuine the story a little longer and I pulled a prank
:Very Very Happy Dance all round the room: this is good |
Reviewed By: Charmeleon On: May 18, 2003 22:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, good one. I liked the prank. They deserved it all right. And thank goodness they got expelled too. I'd be glad if I were them. Yami probably would've killed them. |
Reviewed By: Mary Ann On: May 18, 2003 13:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If I (in the story) find out who it is can i pull a prank on them and kick their butt?? Very good keep on going please..... |
Reviewed By: Mary Ann On: May 16, 2003 21:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
So kabia is out to take over the wourld wooow must pull big prank on him |
Reviewed By: Mary Ann On: May 15, 2003 18:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Their friends awwwwww..... what do their friends think when they find out |
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