|"London Diaries - Journey into Adventure" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ]|
| Reviewed By: Etherelemental On: April 19, 2004 08:26 CDT|
That was quite good. I've read few others like it. It really is a real piece of art. ^_^ I just wonder when you'll update it. Anyway, I can't help but wonder what you have planned for it. You've at least had some time to think about it. Also, I'd appreciate it if you'd read some of the stuff I've written on ff.net (same name for my pen-name) if you'd be willing. Because you seem to be a really good author and I'd appreciate comments from an author as good as you. Though I haven't yet started on any digimon fanfics as I just recently got interested in the show. Anyway, I hope that you update this soon. It's a really good fic.
| Reviewed By: An Idiot On: April 18, 2004 21:29 CDT|
I was a little surprised to find that you'd already had this up and for so long. But, it's been long enough that you should at least have put in another chapter since the last update about 358 days ago. Though, it was quite good the few chapters that you have here. I haven't seen the Army of Darkness, so I really can't tell the references that you put in ch. 3. And the parts of the memories that Freddy had of Susan when she died are of parts of this fic that you've already written, right? Because then that would make complete sense, but if you haven't written them, then I guess that you should start on it. I want to know everything that happens between each part of them finding a sword. Though, you could also put in parts of Lady Devimon finding a spell fragment in it as well every so often, that way it would increase the dramatic effect of finding the swords because of how it would kind of be a note of how much time the have left while they don't know how much time they have left for Lady Devimon to find the spell fragments. That and until the next Midwinter they might not realize how little time they have left before they find the last sword. Also, it would take longer because they'll need to go back every so often and reassure their families that they're all right. So, please get this fic moving again soon.
| Reviewed By: StealthDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 19:04 CDT|
Style of Writing: 9 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Very well written. I've read a couple of your stories and this definitely ranks as one of the better ones.
| Reviewed By: Lord Archive [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 10:32 CDT|
Thought I had this in notes for chapter one. My bad. Anyway:
I use names appropriate to the area. Tapir is a dream spirit from Greek mythology while Baku is a dream spirit in Japanese mythology. As the London group is in England, it would make sense to use a name that originates from Europe, not Japan. Having different names for the same digimon based on region occurs in the real world with other names. What American's call elevators, the British call lifts. The only exception is when the American dub name does not make sense. I will not call Plotmon by the American dub name becuase the name came from O'Malley's pet cat, nor will I use a dub name for a digimon's name if it was already in English like Demon, especially since daemon are a completely different sort of mythological creatures.
| Reviewed By: The Fallen On: July 07, 2003 10:17 CDT|
Just a note--if you use Japanese names, Tapirmon should be Bakumon.