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| "Foreign exchange students" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: dude???
Reviewed By: insanecherry On: January 21, 2004 00:26 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luv ur story plz update. i read tis along time i just 4got 2 R&R. bye t2l. p.s. hi Animefan u'r a guy right * well duh*. r u a skater, because at my school only skater say dude. well me and my friends say dude all the time and we're nit skater, well i'm sort of a skater only wen i hav nothing 2 do.
| Title: Dude...
Reviewed By: AnimeFan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2003 16:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, how long ago exactly did you start writing this? I *know* I read this in paper somewhere.
Anyway, I liked this very much, though you *could* be alittle more clearer in *some* things!
And when you "fall" down, past tense isn't "feel" down, it's "fell" down. And you spell that other way of saying happy, it's "cheery" and the little red fruit that grows on trees are spelled "cherry". You switched these two things a couple of times and I figured I could point them out to you.
When was the last time you worked on this? Do you even remember where you were going with it? Please update it soon. It's interesting.
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