| "Her" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: PeuTiFuL JaNe On: November 30, 2003 23:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey man ... that was kewl ... but bulma shudd just kik him to the kurb rite!! lolz :) keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2003 12:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
D'oh! Double date!
C'mon. I wanna see a gory accident. I'm just saying that 'cos I'm a gore freak!
Update soon pleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease
::stops for breath::
Ok, I think I've got my point across.
P.S Update |
Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2003 12:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh man, I know I've heard that song before but where...where?
Ah who cares, back to the fic.
Couldn't help but think AWWW there. Who cares if Vegeta is out of character. It's your fic after all. You can do whatever you want. I know I do. |
Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2003 12:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
A songfic chapter to kick it all off. Sweet!
That was a really good start. I wouldn't really know about breaking up with anyone, never had someone, but from everything I've read it must hurt a lot. |
Reviewed By: butterflyV On: May 10, 2003 05:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE AND DO IT SOON!!! |
Reviewed By: butterflyV On: May 07, 2003 20:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Keep going with this one. |
Reviewed By: VampireGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2003 15:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey,
Great start, looks very promising ^_^
Hope you continue this soon, because I'm sure lots of people would like to read this. Best of luck.
~VampireGoddess~ |
Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2003 12:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi. I'm reviewing again. Please update your fics soon. I think they're sooooooooo good. |
