| "Yakuza Mayhem" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: vanillamilk On: January 24, 2004 10:05 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
lemon lemon lemon please update soon I a fic that is laced with plot and heavy in whipped cream
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Reviewed By: Alexiel's secret On: November 29, 2003 10:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey don't delay the next chapter >_< uaaah i wanna hotter action from hisoka!
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Reviewed By: shu_chan On: July 18, 2003 13:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice fanfic which you've made! i beg you update this evil toture to hisoka soon please,may god blessing you!am I a sex maniac totur? ^_^ ,and tatsumi's movement sounds make me droolinnnnngggg,and the way you explain errrr maybe a little "horny" tsuzuki makes me blush,I swear so much i love Tsuzuki x Hisoka pairing,I'm a heavy yaoi fangirl excactly,and I love most is YnM ,so many bishounen and toturing '_'*blush* ehm can I write recent sentences in indonesia? gw bener2 salut ama u bcz u bisa bikin fanfics dgn ide original yang sebelumnya gw cmn bisa bayangin tapi nga bisa nulisin,mungkin krn tulis fanfic itu susah baget!apalagi buat gw,Inggris gw juga nga terlalu bagus jadi g minta maap bgt kalo ada kata2 yang salah diartiin ama lo,anyway keep your spirit ok! |
Reviewed By: Ling On: June 24, 2003 03:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fic is very interesting but you really need to continue and post the next chapter soon. :) |
Reviewed By: Lothlorien [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 07:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Lofl this is hilarious!! *Tatsumi* fondling Hisoka?!? I'm betting Hisoka will kill them first...oh please continue... |
Reviewed By: izadleen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2003 12:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It so suspense, joke and surprising. Could it be u will include Muraki on this story? Oh Please continue, i can't wait. |
