| Reviewed By: Echo Tenshingchigi On: July 15, 2003 17:51 CDT|
Style of Writing: 10 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
I loved your story in general, but there were a few typos that could have been briefed through before you posted it. I really love what you have done with Ai No Kusabi. I haven't seen it but I've read a lot about it and I think you fit the characters to their personality greatly.