| "The Beginning of Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Shadow Kitten 9831 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2003 14:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I liked it. It could be an introduction or beginning to a really good fan fic. |
Reviewed By: FairysGift On: June 03, 2003 07:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is beginning to open up to all sorts of strange twists.you could do whatever the hell you pleased with the next chapter.Yugi could break into his soul room and sleep with him for all that it mattered.(not that i want him to)Bare in mind that although you have the power to decide what Yami spent his time doing in his inferno prison,you know the story is gonna end with his inevitable release.
P.S. i only gave you a nine for spelling and grammar because of a few spelling errors but hey we all make mistakes,the problem is we can't learn from them.^_^ |
Reviewed By: sailor moon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2003 16:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Comment/Review:
could use a lttle bit more work. More then one page for the chapter and maybe go into a bit more depth about it, and maybe do some research |
