Title: One Shot w/o Dynamic
Reviewed By: Dee-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 19:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, you (more or less) followed the spelling/grammar rule book. You even used beautiful phrases (ie: "glistening grass"), but all those phrases were something I'm betting you heard from somewhere else. Especially when dealing with one shots, a writer has to have a little something else that sets her story apart.
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