| "The truest love of all" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jonathan The Ham-Ham On: November 23, 2003 08:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome fanfic! I usually hang out at Fanfiction.net. I even have my own penname there. If you have been to my account, or even Fanfiction.net, I love Hamtaro+Bijou and Lemons! Hamtaro+Bijou forever rules!
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: Shiny Zapdos On: September 05, 2003 09:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You took my idea again! |
Reviewed By: Azurillgirl On: September 04, 2003 11:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love your story and I'm gald Bijou
is with Hamtaro those two were meant
to be together. your story really touched
my heart. |
Reviewed By: Angeli On: August 13, 2003 13:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my..that sure was a very sweet story..are you plannig to write more? You should do one as humans..it wold be very fun..
I love it^^ |
Reviewed By: Nick On: July 12, 2003 21:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I share your opinion about true love... And no, I don't have it neither. *sniff sniff*
But this is really the best lovestory I've read in a long, long time;
You do really good work, you have the talent, so please keep it coming !!! ^___^
p.s: This works well with ham hams !!! |
Reviewed By: Boyham of Bijou On: July 11, 2003 17:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
VERY nice... It's extremely touching to me as I'm a fan of Hamtaro+Bijou stories. However, the way you described the scene and the actions just blew me away... I was actually able to picture the romance that Hamtaro+Bijou did... |
Reviewed By: moogle64 On: July 01, 2003 15:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is so great and touching. i hope you write more of this soon.cya
P.S. i wouldnt mind this turning into a lemon |
Reviewed By: StoryReader On: June 22, 2003 06:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm glad & understand what you had been busy so far, I hope you will write about humans love story, Thank You! |
Reviewed By: Naruto9 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2003 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey thank all of you for telling me what i did wrong in the reviews, im not at all insulted,you were right! I did rush the story far to much, so Im going to completely transform the first chapter. ....It looks like lots of you want humans... but I kind of chose hamtaro to write about hamsters. But what my people want, they shall get! SO SORRY about the fact that you have to scroll sideways to read this(this is an old computer you know) I like what my first reviewer said, he must be quite the writer! all of you follow his influence and make your reviews count |
Reviewed By: StoryReader On: June 20, 2003 06:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
I would like you to write the romance of humans story. |
Reviewed By: JAKJ On: June 18, 2003 15:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, don't listen to all those clowns; the show isn't about the humans. The story is stunning and wonderful, and you must-must-must make more. There's only two things I think would improve it.
1) Don't post as a Word document; please use plaintext or HTML or something.
2) I like how you "rushed" into the beginning: It was sort of like opening an episode of the show into her dream, and the audience is shocked because right there all of a sudden they're kissing...then...*pop*! Dream ends. That's a good director's technique. But!: The story itself, from sentence-to-sentence, was quite rushed, like driving over a gravel road. You just need to adjust your sentence-construction style a little, using longer ones sometimes, more creative punctuation, and in general just making it scan more smoothly. This story ended too quickly because my eyes kept trying to jump from word to word like a cricket instead of flowing across the page. |
Reviewed By: Story Reader On: June 18, 2003 06:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
I would like you to write very romance & love of Humans, Thank You. |
Reviewed By: Eru On: June 17, 2003 10:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! this is a really good story! So this is your 6th review and you promised to add a chapter. Please put the next chapter up! |
Reviewed By: Cool On: June 12, 2003 10:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
I would like you to write romance story about humans in the story. |
Reviewed By: HamFan On: May 26, 2003 08:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
What about humans next,thank you. |
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