| "Dark Diaries" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
Reviewed By: ACE117RA [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 15:33 CST
Comment/Review:
great story, please update
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Reviewed By: StealthDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2004 10:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your writing is very good, keeping with the diaries style. Spelling needs to be a little better, found several errors. Certainly one of the most creative and enjoyable stories I have ever read.
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Reviewed By: HyperMan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2004 12:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
About time and well worth the wait!
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Title: Go for broke!!!
Reviewed By: HyperMan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2004 11:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, what does it take to stop a guy like you. Its like your on shootin star or something. Keep on rockin and rollin.
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Reviewed By: Gray17 On: February 14, 2004 16:29 CST
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So Erin's powers are starting to take a mental toll on him, and is it just me, or is Erin one of those people that seems to have the words "have a crush on me" written on him?
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Reviewed By: Dark requiem On: February 01, 2004 23:56 CST
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I´ve just read your newest chapters, and they couldn´t have been better. It´s good to see that you know how to keep going this awesome story, which I think is one of the best digimon fanfics I´ve ever read (and I´ve read lots of them, seriously), keep going. Btw, I´d like to apologize for the dumb comment I made the last time. It was a stupid question and I promise you it won´t happen again.
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Title: The Wandering Author (Still Not Connected
Reviewed By: Houou no Chi On: January 30, 2004 07:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo RS, Im really liking how your making your entires work. I hope to be back on the board by the time you next entry comes out (((Im in my school libraries computers.)) Ne ways Keep up the good work. -Tatsu
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Reviewed By: originalshadow On: January 27, 2004 12:04 CST
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great to have you here again your job is really good as allway keep going
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Title: WHYAGIRLSNAME
Reviewed By: Mallrat On: December 28, 2003 02:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just to let you know in case you already don't know Erin is the girl spelling while Aaron is the boy spelling. That was my only gripe, but beyond that the story was well thought out. And is Selene going to make an appearance anytime soon?
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Title: Dark Lord of Diaries
Reviewed By: Canis Black [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2003 13:17 CST
Comment/Review:
Dark Requiem, in lieu of a response from Rocker, I'll set you straight. We ask Archive for permission not because he's the better author (which in my case he is), but because it's HIS universe (a.k.a. Playground).
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Reviewed By: Dark Requiem On: November 06, 2003 21:52 CST
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I think your story is great in all the important aspects, which are the writing, the story, and the characters. In my personal opinion, it fits perfectly in the "diaries" series and deserves to be part of it, altough I still belive that Lord Archive is the best writer(sorry for that, but you had to ask permission for a reason, right?). Well, that`s all what I have to say, so bye for now, and please, keep writing, because this is a very good fic.
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Reviewed By: Ryan Griffin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2003 12:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
Kim, once again, you're in Archive's territory. Archive already has the entire Dark Seed Chosen tale planned out.
But, if you REALLY need to know, here's how it's going to- URK! *A dart flies into Ryan's neck*
Archive: *holding a blowgun* Oops, dart in your neck!
Ryan: Lookit the pretty little kitty cats.... *faints. Is carried off by other Diaries Authors.* |
Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: September 04, 2003 05:45 CDT
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How about apperance from the dark seed Children,I would like to see Erin fight on two fronts. |
Reviewed By: Ryan Griffin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2003 13:15 CDT
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To Peter Kim: Archive is the editor of the Diaries World. He decides what happens. Archive said that your idea isn't feasible in the Diaries World, so it isn't feasible with Red Digivice Diaries, D3, Dark Diaries, Jungle Diaries, Rose Diaries, Crusade Diaries, or any other fics set in the Diaries World.
If you want to submit an idea for the Diaries World, ask Archive. Note that he has already planned almost all of how his world works and your idea would undo a fair portion of it.
The Diaries fics you read are perhaps the fifth revision of the original fic ideas we submitted to Archive, revised to fit within his largely clockwork universe. Archive gives us room to play with his universe, but there are rules, and there is structure. We write within that structure and your idea would essentially shatter that structure and put it back together with Krazy Glue an duct tape. |
Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: August 20, 2003 00:36 CDT
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Thank you for answering my previous review and please answer my current review. I know Lord Archive said he will not use my idea to have the Tamers and their digimons crossover into Chosen Children's world but he didn't say other authors can do that. What if Wild was the government orgianzation that is looking into this what if Wild or the Tamers have found a way to crossover into the Chosen Children's digital world and world after all,both Ryo and Takaoto/Guilmon did and Wild knows alot about digimon and digimon related subjects and it would be cool the US government made a deal with Wild and Wild acting as X-factor in the Chosen Children's world. Besides no governments in the Chosen Children's world have much knoweges,etc in digimon or digimon related subjects like Wild and no governments in the Chosen Children world and don't have people like the Monster Makers. Hybrid which is in between ultimate/prefect and mega/ultimate level. If you did use this idea,Erin should fight or meet weakest members of the Tamers and their digimons up to their stronest Tamers and their digimons. |
Reviewed By: Rocker_Starlight [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 16:38 CDT
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Hehe. Peter, there is always the chance Erin will meet the Odaiba team. Just takes time and having a chance to, really. And Black War Humon would probably be considered a Hybrid as for ranking.
And Grey? ^_^ Trust me, I appericiate someone who has enjoyed Archive's work so much reviewing my story. And you are onto something, but it is a bit in the future still, so just be patient. |
Reviewed By: Gray On: July 30, 2003 15:55 CDT
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I see the idea of "guessing someone's password" or "let someone else know how just in case" hasn't occured to some of the DD.
And I'm still waiting for the axe to fall on the Selene thing. |
Reviewed By: shadow On: July 18, 2003 15:15 CDT
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you know my opinion
for your work in fanfiction.net
but dont harm saying it one more time
keep on whit this great fic
great job |
Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: July 17, 2003 23:35 CDT
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What Level is BlackHumon/Eric is on anyway perfection/ultimate or ultimate/mega level form? |
Reviewed By: Gray On: July 17, 2003 12:57 CDT
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"Letting his mind wander from the infuriating subject, he thought about the last letter he had received from Selene, the day after the fight with FlaWizarmon. She had seemed distant, her words seeming as if she had rushed through without actually thinking about what she wanted to say. It had been a worry on his mind that something might be wrong with the girl, but he figured she would have told him if something was. After all, best friends told one another everything, right?"
And the circumstances surrounding Selene's adoption grow more and more suspect. |
Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: July 10, 2003 01:59 CDT
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This fic is part Digimon01/02 and part Frontier.
I would like to see Erin make some apperance in War Diaries or Iori and his team and the Dark seed children make an apperance in this fic. So he is part Black WarGreymon. |
Reviewed By: Ryan Griffin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 19:15 CDT
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You've got a great fic so far. Reminiscent of Tamers, with what Frontier should have had, and a Diaries twist to it. Keep it up, I want to see how this fic turns out. |
Reviewed By: reanne [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2003 19:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, This is a great start. ::smiles:: I am glad that you are writing agin. Keep it up. ::chuckles:: and I recoginzed that flannel. lol. good job. |
Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: July 17, 2003 23:32 CDT
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It would be cool if one of the vistors is Mimi with Palamon and the other is Michael with Betamon. What Level is BlackHumon/Eric is on anyway perfection/ultimate or ultimate/mega level form? |
