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| "Realization" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Little John of Locksland On: June 03, 2003 11:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Unfortunately, this subject was coverred originally. It is apparent you only have seen the anime or possibly just fanfics as Ranma's first period was in fact a major running gag for a bit in the original manga version.
And sadly Ranma justd bounce back afterwards but at the time, yes, 'she' did 'freak'.
Now as for your story.. it was entertaining and well written and you also managed to write away the issue of 'if your scene really happened why did the characters act the way they did afterward for real' which is often a problem when writing stories that are intended as insertions to mainline canon. Very few authors seem to be able to do as you did and write something then close it in a way to allow it to be inserted without alterring the behaviour of its participants ever after.
All in all a good job and I hope you continue your efforts at writing. | Reviewed By: Alena On: June 02, 2003 17:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
! I love the fact that you did a fic dealting with that.. that's one thing that always bothered me a bit in the anime... I mean, he/she is certainly old enough to have to go through that! Anyway, nicely written, and fun too! |
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