| "The Order of Lilith" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Blumarshin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2005 23:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have to continue this story on! i just found it and you got me hooked please i hope you do finally decide to update! i truely wish to read on to what you've written. you have wrote the hellsing characters quite well and also it reminds me of my Hellsing story where they are faced with fighting the mothers of all vampires. please i say again and i'm begging! trust me i don't beg much! update and continue on the story!!!!!!!! it is really good and worth going on!!!!! hope to here a update from you soon blumarshin
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Reviewed By: TerribleT [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 00:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was surprisingly good. I had no idea what to expect, and it looks like you really know what you're writing about. This is quite refreshing, especially compared to most of the drivel on these fan fiction sites. I truly hope you have not abandoned this story, as it is definitely deserving of notice.
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Reviewed By: Nmissi On: November 30, 2003 23:06 CST
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This story is incredibly entertaining, the characterisations are spot-on, and the dialogue is so accurate I can hear the characters speaking your words clearly. My only complaint is that there is not more of it! If you update, I should love a heads-up. Nmissi@insightbb.com
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Reviewed By: Bunny-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2003 21:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice writing style...Excellent story so far. Keep up the good work! Can't wait for the rest... ^.^
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Title: Order of Lilith
Reviewed By: Zazreil [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2003 03:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello
I am enjoying your fanfic very much. I appreciate your knowledge of the series and how smoothly you are transitioning from where it left off into the new story. I like the plot but what really wins the story for me is the characterization. Integra is well drawn as is Alucard and their relationship to each other is intriguing. I am hoping you will continue and finish the series |
Reviewed By: Janeth Rhian On: August 20, 2003 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very pleasing to read such a nice story. I liked the flashback scenes which added a touch a nostalgia to the mix.
Your writing style is regular mainstream, but nicely rendered with added lovely imagery and subtle gothic flavors make this one fine read! |
Reviewed By: melanthamoree [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2003 09:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice.^^
I'll look forward to new chapters... |
Reviewed By: LSR_7 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2003 17:48 CDT
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I like how this story is going so far. You actually researched? I'm glad.
It's probably been a month since I borrowed my friend's DVDs of Hellsing so I don't remember exact lines, but didn't Incognito say something to himself that Alucard isn't from this world, or that he's not exactly a vampire? He said something like that. It was very "cool" or just interesting how they showed a flash where half of Alucard's face looked like Vlad, with the thick mustache, etc.
I've been trying to read what they have of the Hellsing manga on the interenet and I have to say that it's pretty funny!
Anyways, I liked the porlogue and I hope it continues into the other chapters! |
