| "Bottled Genius" Reviews/Comments [ 220 ] |
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Title: Visitor
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2003 12:15 CDT
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... Didn't Miroku already tell Inuyasha why he was slapping himself?
Even Buyo is gone? Oooh... (sneefe!) Really shows how much Kagome is lost. The shrine's repossessed, her dad's gone, AND he took the cat.
"I'll never be clean again!" Hee! That whole moment is just perfect. A good take on Souta from beginning to end.
Empty paint can?! BWAAaAAAAhehahahheheheeeeehaha!
So who exactly has to die to free the Wishbringer? The WB itself? Inuyasha's had masters die on him before, but I don't think any of them had that in mind.
I really like the contrast between Inuyasha's captivity as a Wishbringer with his previous life. There was nothing to like, and nothing to miss, except some vague feeling of freedom that he never had a use for until long after he'd lost it.
I still think Kagome's going to make a retroactive wish.
I wonder what the first will look like. We've already covered Naraku, Sango, Miroku, Kohaku, Kikyo... Maybe the First can change its shape and look like someone different to each person.
I seem to remember Botan's entrance into Yu Yu Hakusho. I gathered that the whole pretty-girl ensemble was to keep people from running away. |
Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2003 15:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
great story, please update soon. |
Reviewed By: Kiri no Hime (sorry , too lazy to log in) On: September 03, 2003 13:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey , cliffy here ...
>.<
But I'm still in love with your work ^^
*hopeless*
Kirisame |
Reviewed By: Neko Kagome On: August 31, 2003 07:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I lurved it! This is a really good fan fic! :D |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2003 08:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
I notice that Miroku keeps shifting from "she" to "he" and back when referring to the First.
Awwww....!
Sango is so much fun... So Miroku thinks it's possible to get them out of this mess without ending up dead or wished. Hm. And here I thought Kagome was going to have to use that last one to justify Inuyasha's actions.
I wonder... The reason that Inuyasha's master can't wish Inuyasha free is because the make-him-a-WB wish was granted by a ninth and Inuyasha's only a tenth, no? I wonder... |
Reviewed By: Muse-chan On: August 24, 2003 22:40 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Actually I've been reading this fic, but never actually got a chance to review. Now I actually have that chance. I just wanted to say that this is a really clever fic. It's not fast pace when it comes to romance, and to be frankly honest... I actually don't like it,when the characters get a little tooromantic a little too fast. (I have no idea why my space-bar is acting like a delete button, but it's starting to irritate me.)It
seems... Unreal. *sigh* maybe that's just me, but anyways the story is progressing really nicely. This story, along with a few others are my favorites because they arenot rushed,and I believe the authors actually care if their readers can understand it. So to make it short, it's well thought out and not rushed. Whoo, I just wanted to tell you, and can't wait to see what's going to happen next. I'm really curious to know what the 'First Wishbringer' will be like. Cya~good luck. P.S. Ignore any words that are connected and should not be.my computer is acting funny. It just won't space right. |
Reviewed By: Aurora_thorn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2003 21:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh please update soon! |
Reviewed By: spikes_slayer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2003 02:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EEE! Looooooove it! The latest chapters were great! Can't wait till the next update! |
Reviewed By: Neko Kaogme-chan On: August 17, 2003 09:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! You updated! :D Hey, can't wait until the next chapter! You're a great writer! |
Reviewed By: Kirisame [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2003 06:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As great as ever ^^
( and by the way , hope your results will be good !!!!! ^^)!
We trust you with your story , don't worry ^^
See you next chapter !!
Kirisame. |
Reviewed By: ryuu On: August 03, 2003 14:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
come on now, i need ta know how inu and kag handle things now... i want ta know what they do now that kagome only has 1 wish left, and what she wishes for... i want to know if inuyasha lets himself love kagome the same way she does him... i want to stop racking my poor brain about it cuz it ain't used ta thinkin this much!! so please update ASAP!!! |
Reviewed By: koinu-chan On: July 31, 2003 17:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it!!! turning him into a rat... now thats classic. now all we have to see is how inu and kag end up.... please don't disapointment us (not that you would.... i hope), ja! |
Reviewed By: Morro On: July 30, 2003 13:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL! Ding Dong the Prink is dead!! MUWAHHHAAAHHHAAA!!!!(evil laughter) :)
thats was great! but your killing me with the suspence!!!!
I don't want it to be a sad ending--- but if you do it well I'll forgive you for it. (maybe....)
Please put more fluff for the end at least!!! Even if it is sad.... :(
HURRY FOR GODS SAKE!!!! |
Reviewed By: Setryochi On: July 30, 2003 01:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I loved it. And the one part I loved the most was when Kagome was watching the documentary on the lions. The spelling and grammar was much better than most (specially mine) but it still had some errors. Totally creative plot! I enjoyed it so much I wanted to wait till I got to the last chapter posted to review because I really didn't want to write a whole bunch of these each night. Please keep writting, I hope to see the next chapter soon, love it!
Set-chan |
Reviewed By: Kirisame [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just so lovely , so wonderful ....
You're great...
I LOVE YOU !!!!!!!!!!
* Now and forever * |
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