| "I just wanted some dinner..." Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
Reviewed By: ss10009 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2006 14:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-sighs- why must all good authors leave their stories behind like this??? WHY DAMNIT?!?!?
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Reviewed By: Sageling On: August 28, 2004 11:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, evil cliffy... don't suppose there's a chance ch5 will ever be written though *sigh*
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Reviewed By: Saya Mishima On: January 15, 2004 11:35 CST
Comment/Review:
awwwwww.... why did you stop at chapter 4??? when do we get the rest??? you're so mean! ;)
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2003 23:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, so, I love your story. It's shameless and wonderful. Can't wait for your next chapter!!! |
Reviewed By: Emerald-Ginger-Ale On: July 05, 2003 08:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn,I love this! All that though,could have been one chapter. I wish you would have made your chapters longer, though. This is very well-written and sexy and so kinky and that'what people want to read! I think Veggie should be a tad more comfortable and I think you should be a little bit more descriptive. This fic is very fun to read and I'm sure your lemons will be very entertaining. Maybe you could write it like a sex marathon and make it really kinky and long. There are lots of things you can write in a lemon.Just go read the fic Bitter Harvest on fanfiction.net at the find thingy at the top of the screen. Also read Tina Lang's One Night SA. I dare you to make better lemons cause those are some of the best I've seen. Can you give me some ideas of where to find good lemons on the next updated page, please? Could you also answer this question: what is b/v doujinshi? I hear it a lot and I don't know what it is! Where can you get some? PLEASE update very soon and keep updating cause this story is absolutley fabulous and I love it very much! Happy writing ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Emerald-Ginger-Ale On: July 05, 2003 08:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn,I love this! All that though,could have been one chapter. I wish you would have made your chapters longer, though. This is very well-written and sexy and so kinky and that'what people want to read! I think Veggie should be a tad more comfortable and I think you should be a little bit more descriptive. This fic is very fun to read and I'm sure your lemons will be very entertaining. Maybe you could write it like a sex marathon and make it really kinky and long. There are lots of things you can write in a lemon.Just go read the fic Bitter Harvest on fanfiction.net at the find thingy at the top of the screen. Also read Tina Lang's One Night SA. I dare you to make better lemons cause those are some of the best I've seen. Can you give me some ideas of where to find good lemons on the next updated page, please? Could you also answer this question: what is b/v doujinshi? I hear it a lot and I don't know what it is! Where can you get some? PLEASE update very soon and keep updating cause this story is absolutley fabulous and I love it very much! Happy writing ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Sakura no Hime On: June 23, 2003 08:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG! It is so good! Hurry and finish Please! |
Reviewed By: IcaBob On: June 18, 2003 01:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You must continue soon! |
Reviewed By: chibi On: June 16, 2003 23:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more more more!!!!! give me more! lol update soon! no... sooner than soon! hahaha |
Reviewed By: NN On: June 16, 2003 21:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh bulma has somthing palnned write more soon |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2003 19:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
WHAT THE FUCKKKKK! WWHY DID U END IT THERE!!!!!!!! EVILLLLL EVILL AUTHOR!!!!!
I LOVED ITT!! CONTINUE I CANT WAIT FOR THE REST OF THE GAMMEEE!!! YIIPPPIIEEEE!!!
MORE LEMON PLEASEEEEE UPPPPPPPPDATEEEEEE!!!
LATER! |
Reviewed By: kittygirl On: June 16, 2003 17:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude this is they most creative thing iv ever read its great ok but HURRY UP WITH IT DAMN IM GETTIN BORED WATTIN FOR CHAPTERS thanks bye |
Reviewed By: saiyan_dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2003 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE PLEASE!!! I love this fic so far!! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2003 22:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
But vegeta, I wanted to watch...
heh heh. I love this. |
Reviewed By: VampireGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2003 15:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god your so nasty!.........Its awesome!
On the plus side your a lil cocktease! Give us the lemon!!! Please ? Pretty please? aaaaaaghhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!
Your so evil you know that right? lol great job so far on this....this.......whats the word..ah yes teasingly freaky/kinky story you have going here. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: BlueDietyx29 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2003 14:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MY GOD!!! You have to continue!!! I'm lovin this!! *grabs popcorn and reads it over and over again* YUMM!!! |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2003 14:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DEAR GOD!
What's wrong with you?
THIS IS SOO PERVERTED!! SOO NASTY!! SOO DAMN KINKY!!
I LOVE IT!!
heh, got you there didn't I?? ^^
CONTINUE SOOOOON!! |
Reviewed By: outtadaloop [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2003 11:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This just keeps getting more and more interesting! I've never read a B/V lemon yet where they play with themselves...mutually. And what is Bulma's devious mind conjuring up? Plz Plz update soon, k? |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2003 18:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
DAMN ITTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!! THIS ROCKSSS! COCK TEASIN NEXT!!!!! THANK UUUUUUU THANK UUUU!!!!!! I LOVE ITT! PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!
UPDATEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!
LATER!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2003 01:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's soooo weird, I could have swore I reviewd for this about twice now, but I can't see my reviews!! o.O
Anyways!!
CONTINUE SOON!!
This is soooo evil!! sooo....lovely ^^ I love it!!
CONTINUE SOOOOOOOOON!! |
Reviewed By: outtadaloop [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2003 22:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow I didn't expect an update that quickly! sweet! Wow... yeah that 2nd chapter is quite a teaser- Veggie's really enjoying the show isn't he ; ) (yeah I wanna see some naked Veggie and Bulma on the couch)... btw, I completely second your A/N - if I could draw well I would be dishing out B/V doujinshis too coz they sell like overpriced hotcakes~ I obviously can't afford them so I have to settle for some well-drawn fanart and doujin covers (darnit!) |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2003 22:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAmmmmmmmmmn girl!! That's a crazy story!!
I love it!!
CONTINUE SOOOOON!! |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2003 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHYYYYY DO ALLLLLL AUTHORSSS DO THISSSS is this a new trend!!!!!!! Cause I HATE IT! I WANT TO READ A FULL BLOWN LEMON! (LOL)
Sorry Anywho keep it coming ok !!!!
LOVE YA
LATER! |
Reviewed By: Yari [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2003 17:20 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
LOL! Loved the disclaimer... Very promising story. Update Soon! |
Reviewed By: outtadaloop [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2003 14:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
haha it's true that Vegeta is fast enough for Bulma to not see him but then again, his presence in the kitchen would certainly catch Bulma's attention... and besides it's no fun if he's just a voyeur right? (hm... that's interesting too actually)... anyways, update soon! |
Reviewed By: Goat On: June 04, 2003 14:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
Vegeta is fast enough not to be seen by Bulma |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2003 13:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!! damnnn this is dirty stuff ^^
CONTINUE SOON!! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2003 09:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Heh heh. This is an interesting scenario. can't wait to see what's next. |
Reviewed By: NYLACE [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2003 19:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I already like where this going :)...update soon please |
