| "Taking Flight" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: Arkarian On: June 19, 2005 14:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story was the first i read on MM. i sincerely hope that you can update anytime soon. I really find it very good, if not a bit to angsty to my taste. please update! looking forward to it! Already thanks!
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Title: Dyna
Reviewed By: Banes Desire [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 19:44 CDT
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How wonderful to see not one chapter added but quite a few since I last read. Very intense and unpredictable. I'm hooked.
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Reviewed By: When Will you update? On: October 24, 2003 12:43 CDT
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Hey are you waiting for more reviews or something? I've been dying to read what happens next and nothing has happened since July. Come on, update soon. Please don't make me beg. Have some compassion and write the next chapter.
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Title: Kick Ass!
Reviewed By: Phoenix Element [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 20:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Since I heard you describing the background stuff over IM, I knew you had a great story on your hands. You've put so much time and thought into this, and it shows!! Beautiful imagery, great use of the English language, and well thought-out plot. My only regret is that it took this long to get up to date with it! *please don't hurt me* Many kudos for working out so many little things that make this work so well. Details like the belly-button, how the wings manage to fit inside their backs, and their story of evolution...not to mention an in-depth understanding of a language which you created yourself. :) And I can't NOT love the fact that you used Wufei as such a prominent character. Most other fic writers make him a two-dimensional bastard. You've certainly given him depth - there is feeling behind his rants, some of which hide underlying concern or compassion for his fellow pilot(s). Wonderful, wonderful stuff. :) And now I join the masses and cry "UPDATE! UPDATE for the luva God!"
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: August 31, 2003 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG. I love this fic. You have to update soon... I can't wait anymore. Keep up *great* job. |
Reviewed By: socceremie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2003 13:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really really really really...(5 hours later)...really really like your fanfic!!!! Please update soon! ^_^ :D |
Reviewed By: neko-satan On: August 17, 2003 00:29 CDT
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you will update...you will update...you will update...-_-;;; you will update...soon...
~*neko-satan*~ |
Reviewed By: neko-satan On: August 17, 2003 00:29 CDT
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you will update...you will update...you will update...-_-;;; you will update...soon...
~*neko-satan*~ |
Reviewed By: HellsDarkAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 00:39 CDT
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OH HECK YES!!! YOU UPDATED!!! don't worry. i won't kill you. We all need you to finish the story, eh? haha, just kidding. I really love this fic! I swear, this is the BEST Duo fic I've ever read!!! Still!! Now, do be kind and don't keep us in suspence...(aka.write the next chapter or i'll send my lil' demon minions after you). ^________^
~*neko-satan*~ |
Reviewed By: wren_legacy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 00:04 CDT
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ok, please don't hurt me, but i forgot to review last time! *cowers behind her desk* Eeeep! sowwy. heh...heh? well, i wanted to tell you that i love this story! Your right too, discovery scenes are so cliche! they can be rally hard to write. Anyways, i hope you don't hate us too much here, cause i'm all for the liking of the updates. ^_~ This is a great fic and you have a knack for the details that make it so much more plausible. I don't think i'm so fond of dr. arwel though. *coughdiecough* what a stuck up bitch..... eloquent of me ain't it! O.o i need help in so many ways. wonder how duo will deal with this new situation..... I see many problems ahead for the poor boy, cause every two hours? *wonders how hes gonna pull that off* well, i seem to be babbling, or ranting if you prefer. *looks back at her work* Nope! Definatly a babble, rants are much bigger... eep! shutting up now. Update soon and I'll be sure to come back to pester you! ^_^; Well, Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: HellsDarkAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 11:11 CDT
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YOU DIDN'T UPDATE YET!!!!!!! *squeels* please hurry up! or my lil' demon minions after you!
~*neko-satan*~ |
Reviewed By: princesspriscillamaxwell [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2003 22:28 CDT
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Awesome! its so intruiging to read. I can tell that you have put a lot of effort into this fic. Please continue please i beg |
Reviewed By: Dyna On: July 16, 2003 20:17 CDT
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Well that was certainly exciting. I hope it doesn't take quite as long to update again as I'm anxiously looking forward to more. |
Reviewed By: neko satan On: July 07, 2003 18:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HELLA COOL!!!!!!! i looooove duo fics, and yours is the BEST that i have read so far. YOU MUST CONTINUE! if you don't i'll send my little demon minions after you! i looooooove your story! ^____________________^
~*neko satan*~ |
Reviewed By: duos_deathscythe On: June 30, 2003 19:47 CDT
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this fanfic was awesome...but if you dont finish it, i will go insane! with fanfics like this, i always forget to keep checking and checking, and eventually forget! i dont want that!!!!!!!!
hurry and at least get the NEXT CHAPTER up!
~duos_deathscythe |
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