| "Diverted Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] |
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Reviewed By: kenshinfan On: October 03, 2003 07:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it sounded alot like that one episode where inuyasha makes his choice...maybe that was the point....oh well it was a great fic and i look forward to seeing er.. reading the next chapter thanks for listening^_^
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Reviewed By: PJ On: October 01, 2003 20:34 CDT
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Well I for one am glad this will be a Inu/Kag fic I am first and foremost their fan. I have read some good Sessy/Kag fics but have also read some I just can't see it happening. If it is written well then I will read it but always Inu/Kag is my fav and best (I think) as far as Kouga he is alright and makes a good friend I have read a couple where he and Kagome are together and they were ok but again not my fav couple. Keep up the good writing I know how you feel about it I am a picky writer as well and don't like to post anything that I wrote poorly or that is too short any updates I make are usually 7-10pages (in word) and as picky as I am it takes awhile to update so update when you can I will read it when you post it.
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Reviewed By: mo On: October 01, 2003 19:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
luv this fic write more!
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Reviewed By: dbzgurl_34 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2003 18:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
like this fic hope ur next chapter will come out soon.this is a really good story me will follow it to the end ok well.. later 4now
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Reviewed By: Reality speaks On: September 30, 2003 21:55 CDT
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Yah know the first chapter seemed written all right. But I have to say somethinag about the second. I agree with the Naraku, never happen. Sesshoumaru? Well for a lot of writers out there, they have done a good job. They have created a multitude of reasons for Kagome to pair up with him. That IS part of fanfiction, to explore the ALTERNATE possiblities. Oh and about the converstion bit, thats true for the EARLIER parts of the show, where Adult Swim is right now.( Inuyasha's engulfed Heart is episode 51) But things change later on, in episode 104 Sesshoumaru SAVES Kagome from one of the members of the 7-manned team. And no Sesshomaru didn't fight Inuyasha then. As for Kouga he treats Kagome alot better than Inuyasha does! Personally, I don't like Inuyasha. He's rude, he destroys the girl's selfconfidence. He starts to treat Kagome a little better in the latter episodes.... but not too much. He's still obnoxious,insulting and chooses a dead killer over Kagome.
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Reviewed By: Aditu On: September 30, 2003 20:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
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I'm not one for reviewing this early in a fanfic, lol, but your little begging note touched me...guess I'm a sucker for that. But in all reality I can say that I did like how you write, it's not choppy/fragmented, I can picture what's going on (which is very important to me) and your summary has caught my interest. I also don't usually rate this early as well, so I'm going to hold off until another chapter is out, so I rated only style and grammer. I didn't rate the others cause your story hasn't progressed far enough chapter wise for me to decide on the rest yet, I will finish rating and review again once the story gets going. I'm glad to hear that you are picky about what you write before you post it up, I am more than willing to attempt at being patient -_^ if that is the reason. I'm just as picky about what I read and review, lol. Keep up the good work and I am looking forward to seeing an update. Ah, enough rambling. Best Wishes ^_^
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Reviewed By: chmsweety [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2003 15:51 CDT
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please don't separate inuyasha with kagome! update very soon!
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2003 00:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i thought i was reading the show,well intell she ran,so whos the pairing~@~NARAKU/KAGOME-SESSHOUMARU/KAGOME-KOUGA~@~ i em tring to find NARAKU/KAGOME so if dont know what pairing you could do the NARAKU/KAGOME if you want....but ill read it any way so update soon please thanks
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Reviewed By: Inu-kun185 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2003 20:02 CDT
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Hey, really good fic so far! Hope you update soon! |
Reviewed By: bebebabe On: August 03, 2003 04:08 CDT
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good fic but ahhhhhhhhhhhhh i haven't seen that one episode im gonna die when i do!! so he really tells kags he wants ugly/dumb kikyo? ahh inuyasha has to be w/ kags. ahh anyways please update as soon as u can !!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Llorona [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2003 23:24 CDT
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Write more! |
Reviewed By: ShadowsLight [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2003 17:39 CDT
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Keep it going, once there is more I will put a better review in. |
Reviewed By: princess-of-anime-kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2003 17:10 CDT
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great begging ^^ continue! continue!! |
Reviewed By: Kagura-Hime [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2003 12:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahh...so sad...what a doughhead...*shakes head* idiot, well, anyway, great job! i love it, & think you should keep it up!also, thanks for reviewing my fic, it meant alot & i got a laugh outta it. i updated the next chapter, & you better go read it & answer my question! lol, j/m but it would be nice (ah, shameless self promotion, but hell, i gotta get people to read it SOMEHOW!!)well, anywho, don't mind my mental (i think i spelled that wrong...) problems, i want you to update...now...go...write...*passes out from end of sugar high*
always~kagura-hime aka jen
ps~if ya ever wanted to chat, feel free to email me at Principtsect02@msn.com it's my mom's (:-P). we just switched to msn, & all my favorites got switched to hers (again :-P)so don't mind the idiocy of it, k? ja ne! |
Reviewed By: Tail Wagger [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2003 20:46 CDT
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I normaly don't bother reveiwing untill the story reaches the plot, But I don't see any others reviewing yet so here is goes. good writing, interesting summary. please update soon. I'll be more inthusiastic if you do^_^ |
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