|"Kirei" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ]|
| Reviewed By: R_Winner (Not signed in) On: April 15, 2005 01:34 CDT|
Quite lovely I must say! Your descriptions and wordings are wonderful, so poetic. I think the only problem I have is with the Japanese you put in the end of the fic...You hinted that it meant good bye, but I did not know what it fully said(Only bits and pieces, I'm only in gr.11 Japanese), you have to learn to cater to your audience and write in a way that everybody will understand. You see not everybody who reads your story will know Japanese, so you have to help them out, either write it completly in english, or tell people what it meant in the end. Other than that I have no real problem with this fic. I think it was simply beautiful.
| Reviewed By: Kirei [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 10:25 CDT|
Keep up the great work! i really liked it!
| Reviewed By: FH12 On: July 13, 2003 13:03 CDT|
Style of Writing: 9 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
I love it already! It's a wonderful idea, and I'm glad somebody finally brought it up! Please, keep up the good work!