| "Hiei And the Umbrella" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: Oh! Forgot!
Reviewed By: Silver Neko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 18:36 CST
Comment/Review:
You seem to have shopping scenes a lot so I thought I'd mention something, then I forgot. Is spelled aisle, not isle.. isle is like in island. Okay, I quit bugging you now!
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Title: another great story...
Reviewed By: Silver Neko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 18:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Y'know what? I love your stories, they're great and all, but I hate it when everything I read is better than anything I could ever do. Then again, that's called a good story, right? Gah... I'm so confuzled right now... Oh well!
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Reviewed By: Kikyo102 On: February 22, 2004 00:40 CST
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Hey, I'm one of MM's members, just not logged in right now......... great ficcie, can't wait for you to update. Well, I'll be back to check on the story some other time... update!
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Title: Long time no review!
Reviewed By: LOVER-OF-HIEI [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2003 09:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Just reminding you that I love this story, and I wish you would update! Unless you are allready done...? You know what? Your writing style is much better than mine and I live in America and English is my first language! I have bad writing skills.. Well, I'm only 12 (but I don't think that matters). I LOVE your stories! And I haven't read any in a while! I am glad to get back to your writing, I shall read all! Bye-Chu! ********Otaku~Hoshi
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Title: GREAT FANFICTION!
Reviewed By: Zdawg [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2003 16:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mesa loved this story so much, mesa read it again!! That's an indication that u UPDATE MORE OFTEN!!!!!!!!! PLEASE! I LOVE UR STORIES! THEY ROCK!!! UPDATE OR BE EATEN BY JAKEN FROM INUYASHA! (JK) MWHHAHAHAHAHAHA!! I'M AN EVIL INSANE AUTHORESS WHO'S ON A MAJOR SUGAR HIGH AND THAT MAKES ME MORE EVIL! BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! ~Zarreen (Zdawg)*~
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Reviewed By: black_rose On: July 10, 2003 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your fanfiction please finish |
Reviewed By: pan-pan On: July 10, 2003 08:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
.........--.-
I found it different. and yet somehow, I'm not too surprised that Hiei would be attacking an umbrella as...Hiei-ish as he is.
so overall, I likeys!
you get three moosey points! |
Reviewed By: LOVER-OF-HIEI On: July 02, 2003 23:17 CDT
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Just an answer to your question: youki is like a spirit power. Youkai is demon. Ki is a spirit energy that toher demons can sesne. Like, Hiei can sense Kurama's Ki when Kurama gets close by. Very simple if you get the hang of it ^_^ Bye-Chu!
***********Otaku~Hoshi |
Reviewed By: Trina On: June 28, 2003 03:05 CDT
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It's very funny I laughed threw lots of it. I really liked the umbrella parts but poor hiei getting hurt by human things. It's very good update soon. |
Reviewed By: LOVER-OF-HIEI [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2003 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! I am a member of this site, first of all.. This computer isn't working.
ANYWAY, that fanfiction... IT WAS GREAT!!! I LUAGHED SO HARD ^_^ PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I have a question... Is this going to be a HieixKurama story??? It's ok if it is not... I just love those two ^_^;; Anyway, IT WAS SO GOOD!!!!!!!! I love the tea ^_^ And the umbrella!!! And that lady pinching Hiei's cheek.
Bye-Chu!
***************Otaku~Hoshi
P.S. Please r/r my stories as well!!! Mine are We'll Never Know... And Hiei And Kurama's Adventures.
I think you might like Hiei and Kurama's Adventures. Yours kinda reminded me of mine, and mine reminded me of yours. I didn't copy you, and I am sure you didn't copy me though. Just similar ideas.
Both of these stories are PG13. Couples in We'll Never Know are YusukexKeiko, YukinaxKuwabara, HieixKurama, BotanxKoenma, JinxTouya. Biggest relation is Keiko and Yusuke.
Hiei and Kurama's Adventures couples are HieixKurama, YusukexKeiko, YukinaxKuwabara, JinxTouya. Biggest relation is Hiei and Kurama.
OK, enough with mine. Sorry, I am just excited ^_^ YOUS WAS SO GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON I BEG OF YOU OH MIGHTY XIOAXIONG!!!!!!!!!!!!! ok, I am really hyper right now. Sorry ^_^ I am really hyper right now. |
