| "Painful Choice" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: hmmmmm
Reviewed By: comphottie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 13:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I wish the lemon was up already. You see i'm really into the whole Yami/Seto pairing, and there aren't enough of them out there ya know? But overall this is pretty good! A little more work will bring you to straight tens. anyway, i don't think Yugi should catch them yet... bring the story out for a few lemons between Yami and Seto first, have him really guilty, yet not wanting to stop, that would be really good. Especially if he ended up with Seto! Or, Yugi starts an affair with Seto as well, and Seto tells Yami.
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Title: more
Reviewed By: heart broken yugi On: February 16, 2005 14:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
how could yammi do that to yugi? Whaaaaaaa! but please make yugi and yami get back together please?
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Reviewed By: *Yami* On: December 26, 2003 16:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great. You're doing a great job. But, hurry up; I'm getting boring of waiting you; just be a good girl with Yami, he is so hot, I love him!!!!!!!! ^^
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Reviewed By: Yoshimi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2003 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woot! Perfect! I love it, keep going! |
Reviewed By: Shadow-Specter [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2003 19:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
die Yami!! How dare you! and as for you Seto! You jackass! [bonks them both on the head!!) Oh please, WHATEVER you do don't put yugi/anzu! [shrivles up] I hate that couple! [gag] hei im first review!! kewl!! [dances around] please continue!! |
Reviewed By: nonya On: June 16, 2003 13:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a very good fic and I can't wait for the remaining chaps. how dare yami cheat on sweat yugi with seto of all people. I hate that couple as much as I hate anzu. keep writing. eager to find out yugi's reaction. |
