| "Titan's Reach" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2007 14:47 CST
Comment/Review:
Dude, what happened to the story? It was going good, and then you stopped writing! I want to see more chapters of this one, it's goign really well, and I want to see mroe of it. On top of that, Ranma as a more adult looking woman, DAMN!!! Heh, stupid echi brain oh mine. Anyway, love the story, and I want to see more of it, please update ASAP.
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Reviewed By: Spirit Nova On: November 18, 2004 02:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please start working on this story again soon I love Sailor Ranma/Ranko stories. I can't get my fill of them. So please write more ASAP.
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Reviewed By: White Fox 612 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2004 20:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLZ update real soon!! Love this story!!!
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Reviewed By: Adorable Akane On: November 03, 2003 20:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love sailor Ranma/Ranko stories! And I hate Darien. I think hes a creep. So you have to update the story! PLEASE! Email me when u do! And don't listen to those crak-heads up there. Their just jelious of your writing ability. ^_^ Ja ne silversaori@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: jemtlen On: June 29, 2003 22:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool. Needs a little background like what about the rest of the Nerima Wrecking Crew. |
Reviewed By: Brian Drozd On: June 18, 2003 16:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
This story has promise, but you need to explain some things, like Minako and Setsuna's relationship, a bit more. Hearing that they are in a relationship the way you have it was like walking in on the middle of a conversation. Give us some background on how the senshi are different from the established cannon.
Also, try to work the time line out better. You've jumped around from distant past to present to not-so-distant past and back to present again without any transitions. Either work to make your transitions from one time period to another smoother, or line them up chronologically. |
Reviewed By: the taxzombie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 15:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just finished reading chapter one. I like it. It's a different take (at least for me) on the Ranma is a Sailor Scout theme.
Ranma/Ranko commits the ultimate (for him) sacrifice to safe Akane's life only to discover that she cannot make a sacrifice of her own.
By her act she proves two things. Who is the more noble soul and also who truly loves who.
Akane must now live with the fact that she let down the man who so loved her that he sacrificed his manhood itself. A very bitter pill indeed to swallow.
As for Genma I wish you would have expanded on the one line you had concerning him attempting to force Ranko to marry Soun. The beat down that ensued should have been historic.
Nodoka is coming across is a positive light. A definate plus. Nice to see her as something besides 'samurai mom'. It's obvious which side of the family are decentants of the royal Titans. Sure aint't no lazy Panda's in that line.
The scouts are also written in an interesting manner and the humbling effect the new history you've added had on the outers was a nice touch.
Normally I don't care for Ranma becomes a girl stories, nor am I truly all that fond of Sailor Ranma/Ranko stories. I said normally as there are a few exceptions. I am very happy to add this story to that very short list.
It's well written and thought out. You've written it so that the events that have taken place are reasonable and, in this storyline believable.
All and all a delightful read. Even if I would have liked to see it fleshed out a bit more in places. Truly good stuff.
I eagerly await your next installment. |
