Reviewed By: Masamune The Forgotten [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2003 23:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice first chapter. I dont usually read romance stories, but since it said action and adventure, I decided to read it. Although not very original, since it reminds me a lot of Gohan and Videl, it was entertaining.
I await your next chapter. |
