| "Sweet Flame" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: amanda On: July 11, 2003 19:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lovely little fic you got there. i really enjoyed it! legato + wolfwood = yum! are you gonna write more? i think you should. you should have the later chapters deal with nick's decision to side with vash and then you could have his death be the thing that made legato ask vash to kill him, 'cause he couldnt leave his life without his chapel and stuff. just write more! |
Reviewed By: Legato Bluesummers On: July 07, 2003 20:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story hun. Can't wait to check out part 2!! |
