| "Orgasumu" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: JadeCade On: March 27, 2005 03:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd give you more than 10 but it won't go any higher.. I think I'll come back and read this everyday from my daily dose of citrus. Yummy, yummy! *huggles you* Great job, hope you keep up the great work.. Hehe, lucky..I mean poor teacher..^_^'
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Reviewed By: telynaayuri [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 22:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love a mean Bakura that is really cool thank you for making him that way.
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Title: DragonRider00
Reviewed By: DragonRider00 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2003 22:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT!!! please,please tell what happenes to yami and yugi they are my fav. pairing altho bakura/ryou is also really good and you even prooved it is so please write more! thanx!^_-
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Reviewed By: cheukting [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2003 03:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's great~~~~~~I love it so much~!!! I hope chapter 2 will come soon~~~~~
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Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2003 02:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmmmmm thought I reviewed this one! Guess not... It was good, very good! And so damned hot! I love how Bakura told off the twacher! CHEERS! |
Reviewed By: Meru Maxwell On: July 13, 2003 14:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
Quite a good fic, actually. I just had to point out, your tounge is not an organ. (Weird, as to point such things out) Good lemon regardless! |
Reviewed By: val gal :) On: July 04, 2003 22:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pretty, pretty please with whip cream, sugar, sprinkles, chocolate, and a cherry on top write what happened between yami and yugi??!! thanx!!!
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Reviewed By: gottareadmore On: June 24, 2003 20:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow! hard core. YEAH! that's what i'm talking about baby. i love ryou/bakura coupling. i like yami/yugi too,but i hate the way everyone always makes yami over protective and yugi a big baby. I love bakura's sour attitude though. please update soon or point me to some of your other stories. Great job. |
Reviewed By: Ooahati Elf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2003 16:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
spiffyness...I just posted my own Bakura/Ryou story...but yours is better! Way more fluff! I love it! ^_^
~Zufluchtsort~ |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: June 22, 2003 18:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was a very detailed and great lemon! Good job on this fic. ^_^ The end was very funny too! ^-^ Really funny. I hope you like what you did. I really do. ^_~ Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: Fallen Hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey--
that was fantastic! yea, a fluff and hot b/r fic.! honestly, it was one of the best lemons i have ever read....and i have read many. i loved how descriptive you were their emotions, feelings, and actions. ryou was so kawaii and bakura was so sexy! just the way it should be! you absolutely must write more......don't leave me hangin' for more!
keep up the wonderful work and write more soon!
~*Fallen Hikari*~ ^__^ |
