| "Crystal Tear" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Sharon MacKinnon On: November 17, 2003 19:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yugi:I die? Me:I hope not forever.*crying* Yugi:Me too.*crys**faints* Me:*sigh*Will he keep doing this? Anyway,make sure You make the other chapters soon! Yugi:Me too!*faints(again)* Me:ttfn... Yugi:groan. Yami:*pops out of no where*What do you want? Me:I need you to say...*whispers to Yami* Yami:Fine. Me:Anyway,ttfn... Yugi and Yami:Tata for now! Me and Yami:I thought you were out cold! Yugi:Heh heh...*nervously laughs**running away from Yami* Me:Please excuse me for saying Panda Girls'line!^^ Kero:I bet $40 that Yami will beat Yugi! Me:Well I bet $1,000,000.00 that Yugi will escape by someone! Kero and Me:Your on!
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Reviewed By: Sharon MacKinnon On: November 17, 2003 19:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yugi:I die? Me:I hope not forever.*crying* Yugi:Me too.*crys**faints* Me:*sigh*Will he keep doing this? Anyway,make sure You make the other chapter soon! Yugi:Me too!*faints(again)* Me:ttfn... Yugi:groan. Yami:*pops out of no where*What do you want? Me:I need you to say...*whispers to Yami* Yami:Fine. Me:Anyway,ttfn... Yugi and Yami:Tata for now! Me and Yami:I thought you were out cold! Yugi:Heh heh...*nervously laughs**running away from Yami* Me:Please excuse me for saying Panda Girls'line!^^
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Reviewed By: sonicshadow On: November 03, 2003 19:05 CST
Comment/Review:
I love fics like this. If you want to know where to find my reviews on Fanfiction.net my username is sonicshadowfreak that is if you go there.
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