| "Two Battousais" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: The one who has posted a long time ago is right.
Reviewed By: Yarisha On: March 15, 2004 21:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All that did happen. And Shinta-chan was a slave. Hiko-san (The man who found him and his master at this point.) took Shinta-chan in (Bought him or you could say adopted him not sure how it happened at the end when he took him in ^^;;* But you did a very good job anyway but now i should go. Like i said you wrote very well and please keep writing. ~Ja ne~
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Reviewed By: debbie the rax you want to know wat realy hapend itis On: August 30, 2003 21:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
you want to know what happend it is the two wemon begged for shinta's life to be spared and take them instead. the were granted there request. shinta's mater came in time to stop his suiside. then left and came bake to 3 days later and asked about him. the person said they had not seen him. so he figured he comiter suside and whent to find the body but found the shinta had durid every one. but also found out he was a slave. |
Reviewed By: inulover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2003 18:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic pls update soon |
Reviewed By: fez On: June 20, 2003 08:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i got to say i like it and i think it would be good if you put the translations at the bottom. i like the way you did the story line. its good. please up date soon!!!! |
