| "Betrothed:a Chibi love story" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Amon22 On: March 27, 2005 10:44 CST
Comment/Review:
WOW! That was fun. I liked the ending.
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Title: fav truten stori eva
Reviewed By: manda panda On: February 12, 2005 02:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luv dis, this is awesome!!!!!!!! I read more of this on fanfiction.net, u got bit more reviews dere. i absolutely adore chibi trunks and goten stories.for sum reason i prefer da chibis to da older ones. plz continue putting up your story and continue as much as you can. thanx for a great read, Manda Panda
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Reviewed By: lee-lee On: May 28, 2004 15:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. It was sweet and funny!!!
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Title: WOZIZ HAHAHA
Reviewed By: hehehehe On: December 10, 2003 02:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MUHAHAHAHa me finks dat dis is really funee probably one of the top fics dat ive read hehe keep it lol ;)
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Reviewed By: ssjchrissa [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2003 23:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm still laughing hard. that was so funny. Bulma and ChiChi were trying to stop it and just ended up making them more sure about getting married. the part about fighting to see of which had to wear the wedding dress was awesome. and did they have to watch? that was weird; but so funny at the end. "Welcome to the family." "Like wise." i loved it. you've got to write more. |
Reviewed By: Hope_Poe26 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2003 20:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think your story is great. I can't stop smiling. It's pretty good. Keep it up. |
