| "Omi's Game" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: bekka On: December 23, 2003 16:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
There were several spelling and grammar errors, however...the story rocked and was fun to read...make more!
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Reviewed By: b0mb4y On: August 20, 2003 18:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
hi!
your fic is really good!
i've been reading your fanfiction on fanfiction.net but after they've changed all the nicks i can't find your story anymore.
please can you send me your author name? thanks!
bombay =^-^=
p.s.: my addy: omichan84@yahoo.de |
Reviewed By: Crissi On: August 02, 2003 15:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi Joni!
I wrote you some mails, but it seems you didn't received them! Please write me!
Oh, and when did you update your story?
As you know, I'm very curious^^ |
Reviewed By: MissyIrene On: June 27, 2003 23:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your fic so far. ^_^ Evil Omi. ^_^ Anyway keep it up, can't wait to read more, update again soon. ^_~ |
Reviewed By: fanni On: June 24, 2003 19:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
i think its pretty good.. just at times your tenses change... that's the only major problem. keep writting!! |
Reviewed By: Crissi On: July 12, 2003 15:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi Joni!
Chapter 9 was great and soo sad... poor Omi and Salina. What are Highest and Steel going to do?
I'm as curious as ever.^^
Hope you'll update it soon.^^
Oh and by the way: As you see I'm Crissi! Can you please send me a mail? Something seems to be wrong with my computer and I don't know if you receive my mails!
Hope you read that.
Bye
Crissi |
