| "Gohan, Leave Me Breathless" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: -hakaku123- [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2010 10:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
make another chapter i really!!! want to know what happens next pleeeease pleeeeeease pretty please with a cherry on top
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Reviewed By: Tainted_Truffle [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2007 21:38 CST
Comment/Review:
cute ^^
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Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 04:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
aaaw, that was cute.... Loved it. mooore chapters? Please? juste oone mor. ooooone? please? pretty please? I'm annying, aren't I? ohw ell, get over it. :P
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Reviewed By: Zerianyu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2003 02:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey
Weird ending. Hmm I wish ther was anotehr chapter, the last statement has me confused. Is it a bond, or did she talk to Vegeta or whatt waaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I wanna know. Well keep writing. ja |
Reviewed By: ASSHOLE NAMED KEN On: June 20, 2003 22:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
VRY GOOD STORY KEEP WRITING WE NEED TO FIND OUT WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT |
