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Title: Please post?
Reviewed By: hiyoukai On: July 20, 2010 19:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why do you have this marked as re-writing, but you haven't posted any of the other chapters??? I read this like a year ago, and looked for the rest of it. Well, now that I've finally found out that you were re-writing it, it's been years!! Please, please, if you see this message, I LOVE this story (as do others otherwise you wouldn't have 40 reviews...), and would be so very excited to read the rest of it if you would post the chapters! I begging! (and I don't normally beg, but this story is just that good)
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Title: blah I'm lost and confused
Reviewed By: Verona On: April 27, 2005 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is great, but I'm alittle confused. I tryed reading ythis same story on fanfiction, again, but unfortuantly I'm still lost. But as what I see now, I hope that your update quickly. A breif synopsis of the story will due, I'm just so DANM CONFUSED, did I mention that your other storyes ARE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD.Its fun to see some inocent insest sex once in a while, and some totally random sexing in your story with the Jagsneshi on my doorstep. Please in the future, write more of these ONE-shots- they are totally up your freaken ally when it comes to writing a juicy sex story. I hope your next chapter in A Losing battle comes with a ultra juicy hot sexy sticky sex seen between Shimo and everyones favorit fire boy, Hiei. Verona
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: animelove(nl) On: April 19, 2005 23:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome as ever...!! Yeah...i'm really looking forward to your next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: StrayKit On: April 14, 2005 18:30 CDT
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Argh! Why doesn't anyone review around here?! Another great chapter, and I KNOW that I'm not the only one who's loving this story. Totally 10 out of 10!! I can't wait to see what happens next. ^.^
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Reviewed By: StrayKit On: March 13, 2005 19:01 CST
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I started reading this almost an hour and a half ago and couldn't tear myself away until I reached the end. What a wonderful story about my favorite lil' anime demon... beautifully written and obviously a true labor of love. Needless to say (but I'll say it anyway), I'm looking forward to future chapters. ^.^
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Title: amazing!!!
Reviewed By: Kurai eclipse of evanescense [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 06:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have 2 admit that i am truly a fan of ur writin' in terms on yyh....& although this fic may not be completed any time soon...i just wanted 2 let u no that it is an EXCELLENT fic & that there were many other fics of urz that i have truly enjoyed!!! [=
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Reviewed By: animelove (nl) On: February 24, 2005 21:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yesh,...i am too lazy to log in, so please bear with me...i thought it was an awesome chapter, as usual. Hopefully a month will pass quickly so that i can read this wonderful fic of yours once again!~
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Reviewed By: The Chaotic Ones ~ not signed in On: February 21, 2005 13:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great, write more as soon as you can. that was Hiei's dad right? Write more as soon as you can please.
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Reviewed By: StormAz (not signed in) On: February 20, 2005 17:09 CST
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ugh, you're leaving it with everything a jumbled mess? eeeeevil cliffies =\ Doing the schoolwork is a good thing, dealing with familial breaks isn't :::hugs::: it all comes out the way it's written. And please, don't get it into your head that it had anything to do with you. I've seen so many that have driven themselves nuts over that one. IT AIN'T YOU ... it is entirely possible for people to love each other and discover that they can no longer live together. Sorry if I'm being presumptuous, but not being privy to details ... ah, it doesn't change what happens to the kids. As a parent and a student of life, I've seen it too many times. Just recognize that parents are human too and mess up just like anyone else ^_~ Good luck and I hope you manage to update this a little sooner ^_~
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Reviewed By: TGB On: August 14, 2004 10:08 CDT
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You spelled Yusuke wrong.
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Title: Good Shit!
Reviewed By: A Random Person On: July 23, 2004 16:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I couldn't stop reading this. I read for a good 4 hours! Now I'm anxious for the end. Please update quickly!
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Reviewed By: animelove(nl) On: July 11, 2004 18:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WELL, HAPPY BIRTHDAY!~!!~!~!~ thank u for updating! and i would once again like to mention that this story is just amazing. Hopefully, Hiei won't die...or shimo...hahaha. Update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 18:13 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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That can't be the end...Toguro the younger (I presume) and Yusuke are on their way! Also, I got a slight impression that Kurama and Yusuke were a couple and I'm interested to see if that is so or I was just reading way too much into their conversations. One slight problem I had is that when the POV changed, I couldn't always tell who the new POV belonged to, particularly in the tournament when all the canon characters were together. I'm not suggesting you put in lame "(Kuwabara's POV)" comments but may be some less subtle hints in the first paragraph of the new POV.
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Title: this is NICE!!
Reviewed By: The Chaotic Ones [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 11:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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we arent that big of fans of het, but this was well written!! you need to write more soon because we like it ok? OK.
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Reviewed By: animelove(nl) On: April 13, 2004 21:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is there an 11 for the overall rating?
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