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| "Iris (To Know Who I Am)" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: the lord and master
Reviewed By: waterfall2014 On: August 17, 2004 23:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
liked it all, can't rate grammer; spell properly myself
| Reviewed By: Eleana On: June 27, 2003 15:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
What happened to what you read to me on the phone?? That was good, really good. But this is boring!! Give it a story!!! Common, you can do waaaaaaaay better!! You call it angst, well, I call it boring. I hate to say it because I've known you all my life but it's true. You're gonna hurt me when i see you next but I'll be ready! Please go easy on meeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!! | Reviewed By: gigicerisier [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2003 19:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello, I love your songfic. It's a good angst. I think this couple is Relena and Trowa! because Relena is the only person who suits Pink in Gundam Wing I can think of! Ok and I wrote other several reasons why I think this 3+R(Trowa and Relena)
>You turn away, your eyes going from me to the ground. You didn't catch my blush, but I caught yours.
Well, I don't think Relena will turn away if this person is Heero since she is following around him which causes some anti-Relena people... If she avert her eyes, she probably doesn't want other man and people around her to notice.then this other man is likely to be Heero!
>I watch you from the shadows. The night is quiet. You are still. These are the times I'll always treasure
This person is hiding in the shadow and Trowa is the only person who will hide in the dark other than Heero I can imagine. Trowa will be very observant like Relena does.
>I want to stay by your side forever. I want to support you always. But I know I can't. I can't provide. I can't burden you with this curse. I can't… But to share everything I am with you is the only thing I want in the world.
Burden her with this curse?
This person knows Relena has got someone else and if this person who is talking is Heero, I think he will be very jealous and can't be so patient about it. This person thinks he is a kind of nothing for her, I mean social status,Trowa used to be a namess soldier, no natinality.
He stole somebody's name called Trowa and job as a Gundam pilot.
>You've tried to break my shell. You've failed, and you know it. But all hope is not lost. It's already broken, and I need someone to help me heal. Nobody will. Everyone's walls are meant to come down. But not mine.
If anyone has got shell and needs to be healed. It is Trowa. His past as Nameless soldier haunts him always.
>All I want is to know what happened to hurt you so badly.
To me, if Relena is hurted so much, it is because of Heero. so, this person can't be Heero who caused her depression in several reasons.
Trowa doesn't show emotions on his face but he is very sensitive and caring side in some ways. This person mentioned nobody cared what he really felt. but this can't be Heero since Duo always cares for Heero which causes some Yaoi 1+2 fanfics.
>You don't have to be alone. I'm here. I want so much to help you, to save you. I guess I can keep dreaming.
If relena is alone, because of Heero had gone or not giving her any attentions, so this person can't be Heero. I also just can't imagine Heero saying to her like "You don't have to be alone"...
and this person mentions so many times nobody. It seems he can relate her in some ways. I have read a 3+R fic called "No Longer Alone" by indulgence
which Relena thought her life was filled with lies and she was the only one wretched soul in the world but after confession from Trowa whose past was a nameless soldier and stole other's identity, they found each other as true companions. I truely feel 3+R are just perfect for each other. They are so much in common. Trowa wears emotionless mask on his face while Relena wears her cheerful, happy mask on her face.
Anyway, that's why I think the couple in your song fic is Trowa and Relena. I hope you will write songfic for this sequel. I really feel sorry for this person.
and because I strongly think this person is Trowa, I feel like reading 3+R stories more!!
Well, if you are intersted in 3+R stories, let me know by e-mail. I hope you will write another brilliant songfic or fics soon. Keep writing! |
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