| "She was running" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Mari12 On: July 15, 2003 09:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Even you have to admit it is a great story so far. I hope my dopey families reviews will help you write more. You are doing great so keep it up. I'm sure others like this story as well. My cousin is the auther and my brother, sis and I just read. You would also get a 10 from me as well. |
Reviewed By: Briar16 On: July 15, 2003 09:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes I agree with my cousin and sis you are really good and this story is great keep up the good work. You should write more stories and if you don't have awebsite make one and place your stories in them. Keep up the good work your doing great. |
Reviewed By: Asef13 On: July 15, 2003 08:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I may not be an author like my cousin but this is a really good story. You have a lot of detail and the ending was really good. I can't wait for the next chapter and the ones after that. |
Reviewed By: Anemos15 On: July 15, 2003 08:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is very good, no great. you make it come alive. And i'm looking foreward in seeing how you make Rouge feel about Serena. This is in my favorites and I can come back to this whenever I want. Keep up the good work. In my being an author from a scale of 1-10 10 being the best I WOULD rate this a 10. I can tell you put effort into it so keep going it's great. |
Reviewed By: UK On: June 27, 2003 15:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful story!!! love it please continue |
