| "Is an enemy's foe a friend?" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Sinu-Yasha On: July 05, 2003 14:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like your second chapter as well. and also i try to review for each of your stories, and as always keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Sinu-Yasha On: July 05, 2003 14:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Mercury On: July 05, 2003 11:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, since nobody reviewed your work yet I ll leave my lazyness behind and have a try:
First of all I liked your idea, but in same parts of the story there is evidence that you didn t write much before since some descriptions might be longer to make the whole scenario more lively...
Despite of that, and in assumption that it s one of your fist stories I would give you that 9 points for a very good idea, which I haven t seen in a fic before. Go on. |
