| "Brontophobia" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: yanderyou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2012 19:20 EST
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I've had this bookmarked for a long time, but I just got an account on here, so I couldn't review it until now. One of my favorite fics. Enough said. |
Reviewed By: darkmya19 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2010 16:41 EDT
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i read this on fanfiction website i missed for so long but now i get to read it again
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Reviewed By: paniwi. On: May 12, 2005 12:27 EDT
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wow, another great story, good twist with the "meat" and well done with describing the phobia! And the part about the boxers was funny!
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Reviewed By: Zaye On: March 13, 2005 08:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh gosh, you are THE BEST writer I have ever come across. You are definitely filled with talent and you write wonderfully! I love how you describe everything and set the mood. Reading your fanfic truly made my day. I will undeniably not hesitate to read the rest of your fics. The part about the meat was truly creative and you weren't afraid to describe it either. Congratulations on such a wonderful fic. I really hope you continue to write fics as it will most certainly be a great pleasure reading all of them.
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Reviewed By: Kitsune Spyk [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 21:00 EST
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really good. a little bit creepy with the whole flesh thing but sweet at the same time. i loved it. i live in oklahoma so i understand about the tornado. i swear i almost cried. browine points for that i hope you keeo writing.
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Reviewed By: Mooselini McSqueegee (not logged in) On: October 26, 2004 00:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another one of your stories I love! Though, you did have me cringing at the whole "feed Ryou Bakura's flesh" thing. But then again, who wouldn't find that at least mildly disgusting? Aaanyhooble, great job! ~Mooselini McSqueegee~
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Reviewed By: bj On: September 05, 2004 16:17 EDT
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Hato will you please up date your storieees i no you got kicked off the ffnet but noones going to like reveiwing if youddon't uup date your a good writer i hate to see you quit like this and i n you know who i am so why don't you put millium bbalance uup here there not as picky about limons as ffnet . you just not puting your heart in to it like you used to
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Reviewed By: Gemma (Big Ryou fan!) On: August 29, 2004 12:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! just like all of your others! I love seeing this side of Bakura ^_^ I was just wondering if you still have a copy of Koibito Yami around? I'd love to read it if you do! Please email me and let me know team_rocket_4eva@yahoo.co.uk Thanks ^__^
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Title: ChiisaiKodomo368@aol.com
Reviewed By: Sikandra On: July 31, 2004 18:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, I LOVED IT! As you can see, I gave you all tens. I give you a 10+ rating on every one of your stories. And if you had your best stories on this site, I'd rate them too! But you don't. Speaking of, WHEN DO YOU PLAN ON PUTTING MY FAVORITE STORIES ON THIS SITE? Like Trapped, even though it is finished, and This is Stupid, and Forever Autumn (this is my favorite of your stories, and I want you to put it up here even though it is finished because I still love to read it every chance i get) and Koibito Yami, which I NEVER GOT TO FINISH, and I practically cried when I found out I wouldn't get to, and all your other fantastic stories. WHEN WILL YOU PUT THEM ON AGAIN?????? PLEASE, TELL ME WHEN YOU GET THIS REVIEW!!!! Through e-mail, if you'd be so kind. My address is up there under "Title." I hope it doesn't bug you, but I am dying to know if I'll ever get to read those stories again! Ok...that was a long review... but I wil continue to bug you until I find out, so TELL ME! Onegai?
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Reviewed By: Iris (Iris_Halanta@hotmail.com) On: July 13, 2004 19:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
One told me that I should consider myself lucky, reading this as first Ryou/Bakura cause normally those fics go way different... I loved this fic ^^;; I'm glad they were all so sweet against each other *yay*
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Reviewed By: QueenOfGames2 On: June 25, 2004 23:28 EDT
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Aww poor Ryou!... couldn't tell was that the end? ::confused look:: Well if it was a one shot it was great! And if it was a first chapter then UPDATE when you get a chance! The *Queen Of Games*
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Reviewed By: TenshiStar-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 08:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the story... teehee! But in the middle of reading this a few days ago (yes I'm commenting a couple of days after I read this) there was a tornado warning for my area and everyone around us(I live in TN)... scared me to death. I think your story's cursed... *eyes story suspiciously*... LOL nah it ain't cursed... yes...
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Reviewed By: al On: October 02, 2003 22:25 EDT
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hurray for froot loops
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Reviewed By: Black Fury On: July 09, 2003 15:29 EDT
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Like I said, your fic rox.
actually the first truly good fic where Bakura (Yami) isn't evil and tortures or hates Ryou (Hikari)
I wrote a One-Shot about Bakura/Ryou, "Insanity"
Could u plz R&R? thanks. |
Reviewed By: Black Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2003 15:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent fic, very well written. slightly strange, in some respects
("He got into the Froot Loops again...")
but really funny. Marik (the one w/ the f*ed up hair) is appropriately scary.
Bakura rocks (both) |
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