| "Just Another Day" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Nameless On: April 16, 2004 00:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why haven't you updated!! Please write more
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Reviewed By: Koritsune Dragonrider [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2003 21:52 CST
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Great story! Please keep writng!
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Reviewed By: Yo-ma [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2003 16:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is great! Please update soon, I'll be waiting. I would love to read a Kurama/Touya fic, it would be different, so please write one. okay?
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Reviewed By: village idiot [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2003 17:20 CDT
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update please, i am itching to find out what happens next |
Reviewed By: Nikki On: August 01, 2003 23:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this fic! I can't wait for you to post the next part. I never thought a Yu Yu school fic would be so much fun! Oh, and I would certainly be interested in a Kurama/Touya fic. I'm glad someone alse noticed the chemistry. Keep up the good work and post more soon! |
Reviewed By: lani On: July 28, 2003 18:08 CDT
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I really like how you write, it's so descriptive, and it flows really well, keep it up! =) |
Reviewed By: Trina On: July 28, 2003 00:55 CDT
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well I never read a touya kurama fic so I don't know if I'd like it or not. Well I liked your story so far. Wow hiei met kurama's mom already well I think that's his mom. I hope kurama doesn't get in trouble. update soon onegai |
Reviewed By: Serenity On: July 27, 2003 17:20 CDT
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I have to say that I enjoy your story and please give me of it quickly.I will beg if I must. |
Reviewed By: Tatoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2003 14:52 CDT
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It was an interesting chapter. I find the OOC-ness of the characters interesting and I am curious what you are going to do with their personalities and psychology. Hiei as a computer hacker is a great idea, and he is still sort of anti-social. Kurama is interesting as well-they always say you have to watch out for the quiet ones.
I hope Kurama doesn't have to fight again, it'll be ugly. |
Reviewed By: Eirwen Lai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2003 12:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the chapter but I wish you would make them longer! I know that's hard to do but please try!!!!!!!!! As for what happens I have no clue but I hope it's good. Please more Kuwabara bashing! I would love to read a Kurama/Touya fic as you have me pretty much hooked on your stuff. I don't know what it is but anything with Hiei, Kurama, and hurting Kuwabara makes me read it all very carefully and leaves me starving for more! So take your time and come up with something even better than the already good chapters! |
Reviewed By: AKS On: July 23, 2003 19:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I loved it! :D Keep going with this, 'kay? |
Reviewed By: Eirwen Lai On: July 14, 2003 19:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok I loved the whole thing and I can't wait for more. I really liked the fighting scenes and now I have to go wrok on mine as they are starting to bite monkey butt. can't wait for the next chapter!!!! |
Reviewed By: mocha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 19:55 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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lol! putting bishonen in hell is fun! please update soon! |
